Matrix Of Thoughts
 

Hit The Soundclick......................

Pretty good track son.....u flow like onyx......u talking bout hood shit in the track which is all good...u had you a message going in there, always good..it put a nice spin on it, ya delivery was a lil blan...it had emotion but coulda had more...but overall a decent drop...............7.5/10

streaming track....

beat is different.... feeling it..... like the voice over in the beat.....

lyrics.... crazy..... flow is lovely.... came off different.... feeling it..... crazy....... gutter..... hood..... straight hood.... im feeling it......

this should be on the album fo sho.....

"on the interstate grams in the car"

mad quotables......

"lifes hard.... niggas trying to make me to loose it....."

wow...... streamin it twice......

damn cecil....... probly the illest i heard you drop...... tracks got some real substance.... lil bit of cam in this, wit your own twist in the mix....... this joint was gully!

im feeling it

overall ...9.0

FIRE

"ez"

aside from iunn reall yliek you man.. this track was hot............damn.. for real.. respect..but you need to get Humble man..hottest line was block say hot in all seasons

thanks for the feedback so far

thanks homie :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup:

im feelin dat beat yo flow is rite on beat deep shit understand da message you're sayin in your song gotta respect you you got skills dude

i give you a 9/10

Man... that was a good song..... nice name for it..... the flolwo was very good...quality was iight... breathe control was good too......overall it was very good...
8.1/10

thanks for the feedback sun so far i got all good shit on this wait till you hear what me and tito been working on :thumbup:

guess who it is in cali's thread again.

aight i thought at first ya flow was a lil shakey, a lil inconsistant. then as the song went on it got better and stayed consistent. delivery could be worked on a lil, change up ya emotion and shit, lyrics were real good, quality was decent, beat was a good choice, the intro and outro shit was coo, this was prolly your best that ive heard from you.

overall this was a good track

Aight CALI.....this was straight...Beat is cool...sounds like some X Files type shit....flow is ok...could up your emotion and presence on the mic, but it aint that bad....lyrics are average....overall this is a straight track man...props

please peep
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172631

^wow thanks your hard as fuck to impress lol;)

dopeness.......................................... .thats all

please- leave feedback-- not 3 word responses- show you actually give a shit the artists spending their time to write record and drop these tracks desserve it

I know this thread is old...but god damn...this song s hot, just heard it on the RV MIxtape god damn man..shit is crazy ....