Jim Crow vs 9th Degree
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 12-23-04 at 03:13 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Jim Crow has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 02:49 AM.

I Leave Them Dead-Or-Worse, I Share A Bond With Computers, We Bring "Megaherts"!! (Mega Hurts)
If I Was A Clothing Designing Designer, Degree Would Dread My Work Cause My "Threads"-Would-Hurt!!!

I Lyrically Release Propane-Flames That Errupt-From-Fists
9th Dislikes-Me Cause I "AIM" At Him On My "Buddy-List"!!!

Slur Relevant Words Torward Opponents Thats "Deeper" Than "Sea-Aquariums"!!!
Its Safe Say To Say My Words Are "Elements" Because They Proceed-To-"Barium"!!! (Bury Him)

Trained At Shooting Scholars In Private Parlors With A Birds-Third-Eye-Lurking-Skies
Verses Proclaimed As "Beauty Parlors", Thats Why Degree Seems To "Curl-Up-And-Dye"!!! (Curl Up And Die)

With A "Concrete Ass" I Got The Hardest-Shit Out!!!
I Dont Want To Start-With-This-Prick But I Seen Better Spits Hanging From Retarded-Kids-Mouth!!!

9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 02:52 AM.

He thinks he's dope just 'cuz he's the newjack on the scene
This bitch even sigged proof that he acts like a "Queen"
Actin' obscene, don't bring that crap to me, you're ova man
You'll be here for two weeks, then fizzle out like soda cans
I can't see your drop yet, but I predict
You made a reference to me bein' hot, you flamer, get off my dick
I can understand why he might not step from my pants
This guy's fucked up, his favorite dressing is "Neverland Ranch"
You might like to toss salad, but I rip on herbs
Fuck you, but don't get it twisted...I just flipped the bird

Good luck :thumbup:
Only vote if you understand the punchlines and wordplay.

Voted For: 9th Degree


9th Degree
I Say You Got This Coz Of Vocabulary And Punches, WordPlay,Your Vocabulary Was Decent, Some Nice Shit Hommie, Your WordPlay Wow, Reaaaly Decent Mang, Punches Was Here And Was Hitting,I Did Not Feel The Closer Though, But It Was A Decent Verse Over All,The Opener Was A Good Part Of This Verse, Not Only Coz That Punch But Coz It Was Like The Best Bar In Here, I Saw Better From You, Multiple Rhymes Need To Be Added Here

Jim Crow
Wow, Just Coz You Had "" Does Not Make It WordPlay Mang Not Every Thing In This Verse Was Decent, The Structure Was Fucked Here, You Need To Fix That, The Punches Was Hitting Hard Though, Vocabulary Was Simple Here, You Also Need To CHange That, Basicly That's What Held You Back In This Battle, Close Battle Really I Did This On Structure Vocabulary And Punches

Vote-9th

Return The Favor Link In Sig

^Um, ok...upping for some more votes I guess......

Voted For: 9th Degree

damn 9th , i cnt b bothered 2 vote, but u got ripped up homie in ma opinion and i seen drops from u 50X betta than what u dropped......:thumbup:

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^Blah, I'll get that one DQ'd...uppin' for actual votes...

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

ok u had a better structure and ur wordplay wasnt the best yet it topped his and the personal at the end was nice also u took a few played concepts and made very original punches out of em so props for that
u need to work on vocab
jim u just came kinda played u lacked personals really and ur structure was stretched so do some research on ppl ur batteling and shorten ur lines
PLEASE RETURN THE VOTES honest only
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...242#post1840242
vote on it and drop any other links to peices u have or battles and i will return the favour there just seems to be a lack of voters here on the site thanx
good battle to both

This was feedback posted for Jim Crow
 

Just Checking The Polls Cha Feel Me ............,....

*Has Absolutely No Respect For This Forum At All.*

^I feel you bro, voting can be rather wack at times, but uppin' for legit, explained votes...

Voted For: 9th Degree

Jim: wack drop...structure was blah (work on that)..punches were pretty weak & hardly any of them made sense...but overall elevate more, cuz ur drop was weak overall

9th: ... decent drop from u..wp's are blah..punches were aight... but they connected tho...overall u had a decent drop..nuttin good tho but decent

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=168104

^RTF 9th

Gracias, will return favor...uppin' for more votes people...