MarvJay1009 vs Lawless (Hs)
 

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Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 04:17 PM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 04:33 PM.

dont think ya "songs dope" cuzz u be in da "booth on drugs"
da day u "drop it like its hott" a b da day "snoop gon blood"
shoot 4 snubs..nope ya punk ass wont reach 4 ya glock
u blingin? call it "bed-time" u'll get put da "sleep 4 ya watch"
ya flows a lie...law not a real crip n ima exsposed dis guy
he think he's ova-i,but his open mic 'Nigga buck' got no reply's
skillz dont think are's a like,admit u know marv is nice....
ima call u "wisdom-tooth" 4 now cuzz u think its "smart 2 bite"
4real dogg ya bullshit bar's is just gettin me nauses..
afta i HEAT da SON u'll be in HELL SOON,rv a really be lawless*


*name play his name is lawless(HS) so datz where i got heat son n da he gon b in hell soon concept*

dont think ya "songs dope" cuzz u be in da "booth on drugs"
da day u "drop it like its hott" a b da day "snoop gon blood"
shoot 4 snubs..nope ya punk ass wont reach 4 ya glock
u blingin? call it "bed-time" u'll get put da "sleep 4 ya watch"
ya flows a lie...law not a real crip n ima exsposed dis guy
he think he's ova-i,but his open mic 'Nigga buck' got no reply's
skillz dont think are's a like,admit u know marv is nice....
ima call u "wisdom-tooth" 4 now cuzz u think its "smart 2 bite"
4real dogg ya bullshit bar's is just gettin me nauses..
afta i HEAT SON he gon b in HELL SOON,rv a really be lawless*


*name play his name is lawless(HS) so datz where i got da heat son n da other conecpt from*

ill flows muthafucka ruin ya hype/
got ya motha droppin tears at ya funeral site/

I can't even describe this weak ass flow this one came wit/
you can't be serious OMG he talkin' the dunn language/

this hoe couldn't have a 'goldmind' if he was Timbaland*/
where this nigga been... his whole fuccin style is feminine/

he ain't bussin guns on any day B/
and he definitely couldn't sell 'The Roc' if he was Jay-Z*/

all I see is his weak flow... and yes we got a speaker/
that couldn't 'flow shit' if he had a severe case of diarrea/

* Goldmind is timbalands rap label
* Jay-z sold The Roc to Island Def Jam

nice battle kidd.. we are uppin for votes people..

jea...uppin 4 some fukkin votes

still uppin folks don't sleep on this battle peepz

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

iight this was kind of hard both keep elevating but here is mine
flow lawless
rhmying tie
opener Law
closure Law
personal Law
punches tie

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uppin 4 more votes n pleez explain ya shit unlike dis dickhead nigga

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

dont think ya "songs dope" cuzz u be in da "booth on drugs"
da day u "drop it like its hott" a b da day "snoop gon blood"
.........dope lines, been played, but secound line decent meta
ya flows a lie...law not a real crip n ima exsposed dis guy
he think he's ova-i,but his open mic 'Nigga buck' got no reply's
........ stating facts aren't punches. play it into a punch by sayin " your punches hittin me up bout as much as your thread "nigga buck"".... since not even your girl hit it up i guess im not the only one not givin a fuck...
.........
lawless.. you lose cuz you only have one decent punch.
all I see is his weak flow... and yes we got a speaker/
that couldn't 'flow shit' if he had a severe case of diarrea/
^^^^but its completely bittin or very closely flipped.
..........
yo return wit a vote on my battle in my sig.. PLEASE EXPLAIN VOTES.

aight fam i got u some more votes pleez

uppin vote muthafukkaz

uppin 4 some votes ppl stop sleepin