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Awaken'd 07-12-02 10:21 PM

Awaken'd VS Creative
 
20 bar max
5 votes, 3-0=KO
no d/r or hating
ORIGIONAL

Awaken'd 07-12-02 11:12 PM

my verse
 
ayo dont try to rebel, the lyrics i propel/
castin spells, send u to hell, lose ya wings at the sound of a bell/
torch you, tan ur lyrical complection, net nerd, get u at the star trek convention/
get cooked by my convection, i pleased ya girl, cuz i actually sustain an erection/
betta pack protection cuz she's been in your direction/
prolly got all sorts of STD infections/
i rip you with continuous blows, amazing flows, and lyrical gold/
let the truth behold/
ya bad timing is impecable, hearin my rhyme is bliss, incredible/
spray u like insectosol im tellin yall/
voting balids will be valid to prove i stay unchallenged/
try, and u'll almost touch this like a tangent/
told him i brought heat he wore a vest on his chest/
dont mind weak opponents like u i confess, god bless!/
o u got yaself in a mess, causin massive stress u so impressed/

Awaken'd 07-12-02 11:14 PM

yo try to post as soon as u can.

$__CrEaTiVe_$ 07-13-02 05:34 PM

nice spit man..... sorry i havent seen this yet ill spit tonight i got to go do some shit...peace

Awaken'd 07-13-02 06:24 PM

ok.

$__CrEaTiVe_$ 07-13-02 09:35 PM

Im cumin at you sicker then a porno flick wit a bitch suckin seven dicks....If ya drank 'hersheys milk' ya shit couldn't even spit 'quick'....im a 'cerial killer' 'awaken' these wack 'trix'...'penatratin' ya flows 'easier' then chicks wit silocone tits...yo you battlin me is like comparin 'playboy' to 'ranger rick'...im a 'animal' when i lyrically spankin this 'dick'(awakend)...ill take ya 'rebel' and 'rock' this 'kid' wit out a 'cause'...fuck P.M.S im rockin ya into male meta-pause...ya flow was saggin but they dont make big enough braw...i busted you i guess you got weak enough 'jaws'...this battle is over you let the 'shark' out the tank.. i ate you up and consumed you like crank.........peace

$__CrEaTiVe_$ 07-13-02 09:53 PM

uppin

Ms.Danna Dane 07-13-02 10:22 PM

damn dis wuz a close battle..creative wuz hittin with hard punches but his down fall wuz dis

its over u letted da shark out da tank..its time to eat ur azz up like crank/
dis wuz a blah ending

awakend:

u net nerd catch u at da star trek convention..
LOL nice diss

creativity: creative
vocab: creative
punches: awakend
most effort: creative

even thou creative beat'em in mo categoriez, dat star trek shyt just took me away..plus da girl aids infetcion part LOL

vote: awakend

$__CrEaTiVe_$ 07-13-02 10:29 PM

aight 1-0 him

Quote:
its over u letted da shark out da tank..its time to eat ur azz up like crank/

what i wrote was i ate you up and consumed you like crank but id don't matta thanks for votin at least sombody will

Nefarious Lev 07-13-02 11:06 PM

Borin' shit but....
 
That Awaken'd cat got this one with the better flow and punches. Nothin' great but I gotta vote on somethin'....

Quote:
Originally posted by Awaken'd
ya bad timing is impecable, hearin my rhyme is bliss, incredible/
spray u like insectosol im tellin yall/
voting balids will be valid to prove i stay unchallenged/
try, and u'll almost touch this like a tangent/

^^^^^^^I guess that was your best.

Quote:
Originally poste by $__CrEaTiVe_$
im a 'cerial killer' 'awaken' these wack 'trix'...'penatratin' ya flows 'easier' then chicks wit silocone tits...

^^^^^^^Your best line but your flow just didn't balance out the rest of the time.

Awaken'd verse was overall just better because he worded his better.

Vote=Awaken'd

C.F.C 07-13-02 11:09 PM

I feel Creative had better punches i really don't give a fuck about vocab Awake had a better flow so basically i got to give this one to Creative for better punches i mean awake had some aight ones though

vote=Creative

Relentless 07-13-02 11:47 PM

i think awaken'd took this because he had a better overall verse. he had some good punches and a nice flow. creative had some good stuff, but soe of his concepts was a lil played.
holla
~1~

Awaken'd 07-14-02 12:41 AM

uppin

Awaken'd 07-14-02 02:22 PM

cmon, dont sleep yall.

$__CrEaTiVe_$ 07-14-02 07:04 PM

uppin 3-1 you


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