Critic Vs. Drama Queen
 

Rules:

Battles Go Up Friday
Check In Due Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Verses Due Tuesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time

20 Lines Minimum
40 Lines Maximum

No Biting
No Recycling
Do Not Go Over The Line Limit Or Under The Line Limit
Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines

You Must Vote On 3 Battles Per Week And Edit Them Into Your Check-In.. If You Dont Do So, Youre Banned From The Tourney The Following Week


Topic : Sex Change Operation Gone Bad

This Checking in...

I'm willing to wait another day for him to check in...and i can't vote yet since there are no threads were both of them dropped. Just wanted to tell you i leave on Dec 30 till Jan 2 so i won't be able to vote then but i will try to vote as much as possible before i leave though...

This is my drop for now but when he shows up ima edit this of course...

Stop whining and crying
over ya fat momma dying
Get over it, she's gone
She was nuttin but ugly swan
Laying on ya bed so hurt
Wanna see ya rollin in the dirt
Dunno what to do with your pain
Shoot bullet through ya brain
But you're a big coward
with sperm that's soured
So u wanna get a change
Guy to a girl, how strange
Bye bye cock, hello boobs
Don't be so shocked,noobs
Chop chop chop, off it goes
No more fucking any hoes
Hah,like ya did that before
every gurl likes it hardcore
but your dick was limp "pimp"
not even size of a shrimp

even tho their was a no show I will rate ya anyway
think you're structure was pretty good I loved the flow, but I think that if you just keep working on you're strucutre pretty slowly then you might have it all down but good work tho.

haha decent shit drop.............lol....but of course you get the win for the no show...............so yeh
v/Drama Queen :thumbup:

Lmao...thx...Too bad he didn't show up cuz i liked the topic and liked my verse too but anyway, i can make a nice open mic or piece of poetry out of it...Hate all these no-shows...frustrating...

DQ

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...615#post1854615

Only one i could vote on...

naw flow just said crit peeps and then he will count it. ;)

fuk you drama queen stop puttin ur sig into my shit

Ok nice decent drop drama, but you get the vote by a no-show

v/drama queen