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Wisdom vs High Fructose
Battle Rules:
4-6 LINES No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding 3-0 KO 4 Votes to win 45 minutes to check 30 minutes to post verse G/L Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-24-04 at 02:42 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
High Fructose has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 01:58 PM.
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Yo im the type of dude not to be messed with quick ill rip this bitches wisdom so he aint got nuttin left wit You all on my dick Quote:
Wow nigga u saying that wisdom i guess that was an Accomplisment yes u fuckin bitch im stompin this shit u juss been ripped Be like a Banna Ice cream dude u best done Split* * Banna Split |
Wisdom has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 02:23 PM.
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you said you wanted to battle me..i didnt kno wut to do..
cuz i'm only aware of good ppl......who the fuck are you?.. u deploy from scuffles..fight me n this boy gets hustled.. only real guns you've touched are ya boyfriends muscles.. you don't get the point fool? well then i'll stick ya with it.. i won't give you the boot either......i'll just kick ya with it.. |
U dumb ass retard u wanted to battle me ya stupid fuck http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168035 pz.. good spit tho only decent line is the boyfreinds muscles even tho thats gay :laugh2: u homosexual rhymes haha :laugh: High fructose -----> :shoot: :nono:< ---- Wisdom fuck nursery rhymes Homosexual haha :laugh2: |
Voted For: High Fructose
HE GOT IT WITH THAT VOCABULARY HE KILLT IT FA ME SO HE GOT MY VOTE......A BRA LOOK OUT FA ME I GOT A COUPLE OPEN BATTLES HOLLA HOLLA |
Voted For: High Fructose
both were poor, but obviously i felt this one a little more, because im voting for it. it had a few attempted punches. personals "somewhat" came across, the quote was uncessecary. but whats done is done, same goes for this vote. both need work on structure and decent punches, use comedy. wisdom needs some wisdom, and original AB needs line length improvemnt. and cursing in your rhymes doesnt attract votes. OAB was less wack. therefore... vote: OAB |
This was feedback posted for High Fructose
wisdom what wit a battle between me and u
well let me know if u aint scared |
Voted For: Wisdom
well it's pretty obvious who won this battle wisdom had better fllow better punches and content originals flow was off and i really couldn't tell it was a verse fa real it looked more like a shout out no hate just keepin it real tho |
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