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.Aeral. vs Skriptz
Battle Rules:
8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 = Ko Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 12-24-04 at 02:39 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. 3-0 KO |
.Aeral. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 02:13 PM.
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Skriptz ill? .. This queer I'm erasin his fate..
..Put a 45 in his mouth & he still gettin' ate You'll get left with bruises once my darts hit.. ..& he's the ruler of the game, so I'm the yardstick Heat up your mind & put your brain in the oven.. ..& take ya heart outta chest to show ya some lovin' The text's speeding, Headed for ya dome & tips heating.. ..& I'm writing in red..... Cos I left skriptz bleeding |
Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-04 02:20 PM.
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With lyrics you don't bite you nibble...I'll murk your ass for shits and giggles
This aint no riddle...a broke comedian cracks your jokers with scribbles Herbs like you are just like a virus' putting our computers at risk You'll never have my talent, even if you put my verse on a disc And believe me, I dont really want no beef so dont get mad Take your period out on someone else, preferably your dad Structure is the wackest part of ur verse..wordplay in ur rhymes is missin This kid thinks he's Suga Ray...nah, thats just sugar lines you spittin Quick Key |
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Voted For: Skriptz
Ok u got my vote because u had way better punches and rhyme scheme then Aer but it was bassically a even battle just that Aer needs to elavate ver badly cuz from the third line down it sucked but urs was good all the way through so overall my vote goes to Skriptz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
"...it was an even battle, but yours was good all the way through and his sucked from the third line down.."
that doesn't make any sence whatsoever.. idiot. |
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..it's a shame how long it takes for votes in this damn site.... |
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