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Freestyle#4 (betta Know)
.:Ill IntentionZ:. PRODUCTION
Who I be, before you talk shit and I’ll come with an fine answer Taking inch of your breath, with my sickness that embraces cancer My krew is like Rudolph, beating you leaving you with an red nose Fuck you hoes, leave with multiple hits and spots like butter corn Leave your torso torn, we was sick since we was born, cha feel me No that don’t mean you can touch us, our krew is hard than concrete Bettah know our krew ill intensions on an killing spree as we speak A win from illusion diplomats, naw str8 that just an illusion cha feel me Ill intensions like an hard crust, take an bite, get your teeths broken up We is like an condom, yall just cant fuck with us, u know we ill don’t front Fuck it I’mma going to leave this last line taking yall out in matter of seconds Ill intensions is coming up, breaking yall blue prints in crump‘s, feel the blood we eruption NAW FUCK THAT I AINT FINISH…………………. I’m gonna keep hitting yall with these dangerous tactics I’m always above you like an numerator mathematical fraction Ripping yall krew’s into section, till we hear no sounds from yall Like mount. Everest we stay high, we like yao ming we above all :shoot: :thumbup: |
hmm not bad...the flow is kinda a problem....but the stucture was pretty good...and then the vocabulary was pretty good...you used some pretty good emtaphores so that was tight...then you had a lil bit of wordplay in a few of them bars..witch i thought was pretty kool....so overal this wasenbt to bad...7.4/10
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O Thanks For The Feed Fam....uppin For Some More God Damn Feed
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you better crit my shit foo...
ahem.. the flow was a bit off..but didn't effect anything..so its good text flow.. the wordplay was coo..and It seemed like a freestyle..braggin punchlines..etc.. It didn't bore me..and It actually had me leaving a crit..so it must be good 7.9/10 it coulda been an 8 if u didn't change your name... |
WHY YOU STILL LIVING :shoot: :shoot: DIE DIE FOOL DIE :laugh:
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don't say that about your great grandfather..
I ghostwrite so much for you..I'm your dope dealer foo :) |
SHUT THE FUCK UP
YOUR ABOUT TO RECIEVE THE SMILY :wtf: i told you not to fuck with me :nono: |
lmfao
hey im drastik but i changed my nme to a whacker one hardy har har :whacky: |
Damn~! Igot Beat In An Smily Battle
Will Be Back Indeph -ghost |
YO UPPin
uppin for more feedbacks holla at cha boi ~! |
Nice freestyle man...I thought the flow was on point, and you did have some nice metas thrown around in there...Good shit fam...Uppin this for my dawg drastik aka Mista...1
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