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wen u fall to deep
yo wen u fall to deep in love//
everybody begins to push and shove// tey keep sayin i want tis and i want tat// tis is gettin a bit to emotional for tis kat// wen u fall to deep and u begin usin drugs// tha only things u want now r kisses and hugs// but now ur layin in a hospital stretcher cause u over dosed// tha only rememberence u have left is ur ghost// tis is wat happens wen u fall to deep wit tellin lies// noone carin about u and not givin u goodbys// caused tey found out tha truth and now ur in jail// spendin eternity until someone pays for ur bail// wat happens wen u fall to deep in debt// everything of urs gets redeemed and u forget// to pay tha bills tat u needed to pay// now ur livin in tha jungle and tha other animals think ur tha new pray// tis is wat happens wen u fall to deep in a bet// u thought u won cause tha table was set// now ur getin capped and getin tossed in tha bay// noone cares where u went and continue on there day// tey dont care tat ur gone but tis is where everythin went wrong// a new investigation started wen ur body was found on tha shores of hong kong// now tha killers r bein traced cause tey went to deep in murder// found out is wat ur wife so they decided to hurt her// subject found guilty but pleaded inno-cent// tha clues were found in tha closet vent// tis is wat happens wen u go to deep// but as of now all tha victims r put to sleep// |
this was deep dawg, much props deserved and given, like always dawg, you need to quit gettin' slept on, up your vocab a little bit, used creativity, peace 'n' keep spitting
signed, ~madd |
yo thanx for tha input madd i dont kno y thesse kats keep sleepin on my pieces oh well uppin
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Yo you got alot of tis...thats koo tho. Yo, this peice was good, but to me it needs alittle more body to it. Be more descripted...It sounds more like a poem. But that you spoke of is true. Thats why theres a God to give us HOPE!! Only love. Much love and God Bless you...
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uppin for more thoughtson tis piece and thanx for ur insight
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yo leo i spit tha way i do cause tats how i think em its all in ur head and tats how tey come out tha way there r
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uppin for more insigt from different peeps aight
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i liked it you have alot of imagination and deep thoughts each post projects it
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well ive been workin on tat and i guess it shows thanx for ur input uppin
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yo we got like 4 posts new on here must peep me vs masterblaster collab then me and gambred under makeng know centz
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aight i will
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uppin on wat others think
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uppin for others insights
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damn boy....that was amazing....really feelin it...wow....
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uppin
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