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The Colour Of Life
The Colour Of Life
Life can be dissected into a malevolent colour spectrum Each section helping to define the spectacle that is life Each section intertwining with the other to produce perfection Colour merging gracefully and flowing majestically, movement doesn't cease Emulating,Timeless, brushtrokes by Van Gogh or Jean-Paul Baptiste Black,Yellow, Brown, Tan, Green, Purple, Red and White Look across God's canvas, each can be easily pointed to as a colour of life What beautiful wonder is here,another world,another life, another colour Youth associated with vibrant vibrance, like the flash after thunder These of colours light, however due to their transient nature will fade And the flash of sun within the vessel shall dim and mark death one-day Sadness characterised by trickles of clear lysosome down the landscape Afterwards leaving lines like glaciers of past, in a random wave shape The colours of volcanicity, mark the shedding of life's essence A universal colour that symbolises life,bringing pain in its prescence Pieces of the spectrum lie undiscovered, those that depict the soul Those that depict the concious, the mind, the process of thought Unpaintable, unseen entities, yet to be given a colour identity Darkest to Lighest, the colours of life from the dullest to the brightest Have many connatations of emotions, reflecting the ways of our being Although many undecipherable, each is sympathetic to its others Each of the Colours, projected to produce God's masterpiece.....Life |
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uppin 4 feedback
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feedbak on dis mothafuka plz....fav is returned
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wow at this being mad slept on. This was a nice drop man. I like the creativity. The flow was a bit off but I loved the words you chose for this. The emotion and meaning was deep. I like the metaphores you used in it. There were a few places where i thought you over done it with vocab, but the imagery was at a vivid level. Nice drop man, keep it up.
peace, Mez |
thanks 4 da feed yo...................upppppinnnn 4 mo
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str8 poem keep at it and you will be iight.
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thanx 4 the"feedbak" i suppose..lol
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hmmnnn very very nice...structure and all....vocab was nice and i saw a lot of imagery here......pretty damn talented
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werd...thanks man.....................uppin 4 mo fbak....
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are we not suppose to up our poems?
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man dnt b cloggin up ma shit...............ask a mod if ur not sure bout shit
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IM surpsrised This is beein Slept on .....................Personaly i Like it ..................it has a whole lotta Meaning to it ........................where did you get a topic like that ? lol But ne ways I Like it but the structure was very hard to read so ill give it a 9/10
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weerd man...........ill drop sum fbak on yo shit....
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