come hate on me...i dont give a fuck
 

k...

i aint a producer, but i'm looking to improve a lot, and what i really need is advice. listen to this:

Beat XVIII

drop your thoughts, critisism, advice..

sound techno slowed down...........

yo, i can tell u used fruity loops to make this, cuz u useing the defualt sounds, get sum new samples to go in it and u shud be able to get away with it, also change the beat a bit more, and make it obvious where the hook is supposed to be, i cudn;t tell. other tan that good luck, i started out with fruity loops, and now i got sum what me and my m8s consider hot beats, and i ain't got no hardware or nuttin.

peace TALV

yea what they said..dont use fruityloop sounds and u'll be better, cuz the patterns themselves werent THAT bad

peep this if u get a chance

"TIL I COLLAPSE"

http://artists.mp3s.com/artist_song/2595/2595821.html