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Cannabarz vs High Fructose
Battle Rules:
4-6 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 12-27-04 at 12:06 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
High Fructose has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 11:22 PM.
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Yo im stoppin ya pop heres a jammin Star
Im toppin ya best well i guess im Cannin Bars You aint stopin the definition you know im tight You a derrty dude i put water on ya and i see the light you Boastin and braggin dude ill juss rip this turd You only posting in the fuckin Fl and u mad u only rip herbs |
Cannabarz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 11:52 PM.
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whos even SAW THIS GUY, LAW DECIDES ..I blessed-ya-LIMITS !! .. specially when ya fuckin postbit looks like a piss TEST FROM GRIMACE !!.. ya image-weak .. but heh, you get notin from HIGH FRUC .. when he couldn't get a fuckin fan puttin his face next to a SKY DUCT !!.. this guy-sucks, jesus !!! get a fuckin real win ! let this FUCKA BOAST !!.. im happy, it'll took 30 minutes to get orange juice and FRUC' A TOSE !!!.. (tose/toast) |
Voted For: Cannabarz
whos even SAW THIS GUY, LAW DECIDES ..I blessed-ya-LIMITS !! .. specially when ya fuckin postbit looks like a piss TEST FROM GRIMACE !!.. nice multi’s here ya image-weak .. but heh, you get notin from HIGH FRUC .. when he couldn't get a fuckin fan puttin his face next to a SKY DUCT !!.. decent this guy-sucks, jesus !!! get a fuckin real win ! let this FUCKA BOAST !!.. im happy, it'll took 30 minutes to get orange juice and FRUC' A TOSE !!!.. decent closer Yo im stoppin ya pop heres a jammin Star Im toppin ya best well i guess im Cannin Bars … You aint stopin the definition you know im tight You a derrty dude i put water on ya and i see the light …ok you Boastin and braggin dude ill juss rip this turd You only posting in the fuckin Fl and u mad u only rip herbs …no Overall… Cannabarz took this one…came harder in the punches And had a decent structure…but overall came harder in The punches tho Return Tha Favor Cannabarz [Size=3][url] http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=168058 [/ur] |
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Voted For: Cannabarz
High Fructose: Yo im stoppin ya pop heres a jammin Star Im toppin ya best well i guess im Cannin Bars Weak opener, self-glorification You aint stopin the definition you know im tight You a derrty dude i put water on ya and i see the light More self-glory in 1st line, no real punch here you Boastin and braggin dude ill juss rip this turd You only posting in the fuckin Fl and u mad u only rip herbs Weak, 'nuff said... Cannabarz: whos even SAW THIS GUY, LAW DECIDES ..I blessed-ya-LIMITS !! .. specially when ya fuckin postbit looks like a piss TEST FROM GRIMACE !!.. Stretched a little bit, and punch didn't really hit ya image-weak .. but heh, you get notin from HIGH FRUC .. when he couldn't get a fuckin fan puttin his face next to a SKY DUCT !!.. Played concept, but decent this guy-sucks, jesus !!! get a fuckin real win ! let this FUCKA BOAST !!.. im happy, it'll took 30 minutes to get orange juice and FRUC' A TOSE !! Ok closer, a little on the weak side... Winner: Cannabarz, with an overall better verse. But Can it didn't seem like you cam very hard on this one, I've see better from you. Return the favor to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only... |
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Voted For: High Fructose
Vocab - Bars Flow - Bars Punches - Defined Personals - Defined Structure - Defined Multies - Didn't See Any .. Metas - Bars My vote is to - Defined. Weak Battle . Elevate More Peeps. |
Voted For: Cannabarz
Lemme break it down: Cannabarz: punches:9/10 flow:10/10 wordplay:8/10 personals:6/10 Overall some pretty good shit man...nothing short of what I expected to see from you...You pretty much killed it... The Defined One: Punches:6/10 flow:10/10 wordplay:7/10 personals:4/10 Overall, your verse was decent...Your punches werent hitting as hard as they needed to be against a competition like cannabarz, so that lost your vote...Everythang else was iight, except I really didnt see any personals from either of you... |
By the way, can both of you return the favor and hit up the two open mic links in my sig and hook me up with a little feed? Thanx...1
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Voted For: Cannabarz
Canna get my vote becuase he came harder, his flow was better, he had better strucutre better personels and I could understand his verse more here is how I graded it. CANNA whos even SAW THIS GUY, LAW DECIDES ..I blessed-ya-LIMITS !! .. specially when ya fuckin postbit looks like a piss TEST FROM GRIMACE !!.. ya image-weak .. but heh, you get notin from HIGH FRUC .. when he couldn't get a fuckin fan puttin his face next to a SKY DUCT !!.. 8/10 keep elevating tho homes AB Yo im stoppin ya pop heres a jammin Star Im toppin ya best well i guess im Cannin Bars You aint stopin the definition you know im tight You a derrty dude i put water on ya and i see the light 5.9/10 keep workin hos vocab flow and strucutre and keep elevating to please hit up on my links peace. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: High Fructose
both were quite WEAK... but A.B came up with better punches (besides the low quality)..his verse made more sense to me...and the structure was better that canab'z..A.B i think u should hook up on battles with longer line limits cos i think u could entertain a lil better with more lines.... vote on mine too...sig below.. |
Voted For: Cannabarz
easy win for cannabarz had some good lines and ab was just weak simple rhymes and self glorification and he's clser was a false statement |
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