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High Fructose vs Skriptz
Battle Rules:
6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 = Ko Vote On This Fucking Battle Minimum posts to vote: 130 Check in by: 12-27-04 at 12:01 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
High Fructose has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 11:32 PM.
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Well look here skripz imma give you some tips
You got dusty spits nigga u need to Refurbish Lips Well im Puttin things together great like a stapler Put the Decloration* on ur writtins n ull have a Valuble peice of paper If You say u the greatest tight or any of that im the same** You a peice of shit Now you know why the dump is callin ur name * Decloration of Indepence is important peice of paper ** He put No Recyling Dumg Garbage Dumb .. |
Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-04 11:53 PM.
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Haven’t battled in a while. . . I’m feeling a little rusty
But what I’m wondering is.... ..........how can you have 5 wins and still be dusty? You Been here since August…still a light weight? Shit doesn’t factor H.F. thinks he's rolling on dubs but he's driving a tractor High F. is whack. . .all his punches are missing... ...Like where he's loctaed* When it comes to spitting. . .H.F. don’t bring shit… …Like he’s constipated Quick Key *He has no location Vote People |
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Voted For: High Fructose
punchs-tdo person-none mets-none multis-none struck-tdo i oliked tdo better he camr harder had better struck by far the other guy had wack punches and struck easy win for tdo came hard had better stuck none had personals or nuffin pz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Skriptz
Well look here skripz imma imma give you some tips You got dusty spits nigga u need to Refurbish Lips ^^nope Well im Puttin things together great like a stapler Put the Decloration* on ur writtins n ull have a Valuble peice of paper ^^decent If You say u the greatest tight or any of that im the same** You a peice of shit Now you know why the dump is callin ur name ^^weak coulda came harder kid.....you had a good flow but ..........you had basic vocab.....stretched lines.......bad structure........weak punches and i gues a personal attempt..........okay meta.....no wordplay Haven’t battled in a while. . . I’m feeling a little rusty But what I’m wondering is.... ..........how can you have 5 wins and still be dusty? ^^decent You Been here since August…still a light weight? Shit doesn’t factor H.F. thinks he's rolling on dubs but he's driving a tractor ^^humerous High F. is whack. . .all his punches are missing... ...Like where he's loctaed* When it comes to spitting. . .H.F. don’t bring shit… …Like he’s constipated ^^nice personal/punch okay you came harder with punches and personals.........you had better vocab..........your flow was better.........your structure wasnt too great..........you had no multi's........ v/Skriptz |
Voted For: High Fructose
aii this is how i feel HF You Came wit some nice punchez ......your structure was good............and your meta's was good but you need to work on multi's and vocab Bcuz thats what was lacked other than that i like your verse//////// Skriptz You Came strong......jus not strong enough bcuz yo left out alot of basic thing that a verse needs and thats what hurt you the most...............I think really you need to go n try to work on ya style..........no hate .................jus a suggestion *********************************************** The Favor Better Be return or else lol j/k*************** * but plz do im askin as a favor plz do return the favor....peace************************************ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Skriptz
hmmm wack battle.. better punches by skript and personals.. u both need to elevate badly.. i know skriptz spit half ass shit on purpose.. but damn that other cat needs to step it up.. better flow by skript structure skriptz punches skriptz and personals skriptz... not a good battle at all.. elevate plz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
w/e buddha :cool: i dont need to elevate.....
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Voted For: Skriptz
Vote:skriptz Haven’t battled in a while. . . I’m feeling a little rusty But what I’m wondering is.... ..........how can you have 5 wins and still be dusty? gd opener, punch, hard hittin and witty - 8/10 You Been here since August…still a light weight? Shit doesn’t factor H.F. thinks he's rolling on dubs but he's driving a tractor meh.........ok i suppose as ur filler..a bit lame - 6/10 High F. is whack. . .all his punches are missing... ...Like where he's loctaed* When it comes to spitting. . .H.F. don’t bring shit… …Like he’s constipated lol, gd humour for your closer, hard hittin - 8.5/10 Well look here skripz imma give you some tips You got dusty spits nigga u need to Refurbish Lips humour, but not hard hittin, an ok opener-7/10 Well im Puttin things together great like a stapler Put the Decloration* on ur writtins n ull have a Valuble peice of paper ok not a punch at all....and bad as a filler cos dnt hep ur drop at all -5.5/10 If You say u the greatest tight or any of that im the same** You a peice of shit Now you know why the dump is callin ur name nice attempt at orignalty and wordplay, an ok punch but weak, a decent closer tho -7.5/10 RTF - links in sig |
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