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Tribute to the lost
We runnin out of spaces on the wall
too many faces gotta draw too many faces that's runnin off with they jaws at a pace that drops us in aww we spray painting em on walls and cars and it can't help remember but it still can't take away the scars and so far all i here is nonsense you fight cause you ain't liked but ain't nothin in this world that's as serious as a life and ain't a weapon as serious as a pencil or a mic cause you can shoot a pistol drop a bomb and everything is often calm but use a pencil off and on and you can make an awful song the news'll make it awesome dog now we got a blossom gone a rose in the concrete torn out of the ground a tree growin in brooklyn why would we cut it down and frankly i'm sick of pictures beginning to hate art cause every time i draw a picture it's out of an aching heart sorry this poem's unfinished |
str8 poem but I thought you could put more emotion but still str8.
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nice poem flowed good but like he said^^^^it lacked some emotion but it had a good meanin to it...can't wait to read the finished one
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