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Freestyle #5 (diss To Poetics At My Skool)
This fool made an diss track to my crew.
so i made an diss to him (havent found an beat yet) YO POETICS :nono: Making an diss track to my crew yall will get quick lit like an candlestick bitch Why yall fucking with us, we’ll make yall have full of sorrow like ur krew poetics We’ll ripp yall into sections, like your punches with no signal, they’re no connecting Saying “we’ll shit on you’? kid how the fuck” you’re the one’s who is constipating I cant play the guitar but I’ll take it and bash it on your head, leaving you thoughtless rock aint gay? What’s that shit called when you running around in circle? The cock pit? I gotten personal with your ass, call me an book worm nigga, cause I can read you Call me crew an mop, cause we’ll verbally clean you, making your bodies an see through Sickness? I don’t seek thee, you have weak knees, didn’t do nothing when I got in your bio’s face And you’re the leader of the crew, didn’t even stood for your own member, damn what an disgrace |
Um Uppin For Some God Damn Votes Holla At Cha Boi~!
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thats one~~! 2nd one is coming http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1848458 |
Man C'mon Uppin For Some Damn Feedbacks Holla At Cha Boi~!
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ight...i could tell it wuz a freestyle...some lines didnt ryhme...some good punches though and wordplay...id give it a 7/10...couldve been improved though.......~1~
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thanks for the feedback fam. uppin for some more feedbacks. Don't sleep on this open mic freestyle, Chea bitches
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Damn come on uppin for some more feedbacks. Holla at your boi.
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pretty good......your stucture still needs work and you still use to many words to flow proper but i guess audio is different it was all good n all....but jsut work on those use like 6-13 word per line....its what i doo....but overal this was a tight drop...8/10
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