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America,America
my take on life is basic.. different day same shit
facin sterotypes of racist self proclaim patriots.. tryin to stay morally sacred im overwhelmed with blatant hatred.. what is reverse discrimination.. if ya nation has no pigmentation.. the penetration of my knowlege can rejuvenate the brainless.. they sit back and push pawns, but claim that there blameless.. i watch the envy spurn in them, am i a revolutionary, naw i just dont take hits without returnin them poloticians promises us shit, when there heart is far from it, just to get ya vote,and go against every thing that got them in yo the problem is,theres to much hope in the creation, and less in the creator, for the perfect president we waitin ,while God is forsaken, more or less i plan to bless every body within my vicinity, almost 500 years,and we still aint free so u can catch me shakin my fist at the statue of liberty cursin this perverse country,practicin my freedom speech suddenly awaken from dreams of takin tha mark, that 666 gotme wonderin... we aint robots,so y they tryin to put microchips in our wrist ignorance is bliss so america must be heaven ill feed u bread thats unleaven.. im questionin the decsions to war and wreck countries then they turn around give them our tax money then when there economy rises,the money doubles back but that part dont make the news,we dont see none of that NO more united state welcome folks to the new age rome im just tryinto get my life right ,before tha antichrist takes his throne |
str8 shit but keep it up yo.
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thanx my nigga stay up
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This poem was pretty good, nice flow and content here, i liked the vocab you used,it really captured your point welll, keep it up man, good to see more people posting poems..pc
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thanx ...............just trying to build up a reap around here..................
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nice drop on this. it had good flow, vocab and the content was good 2. keep doin you kidd. return the favor. pc
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thanx for the feedback my man good looks
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flow was consistent, vocab was hot
good overall, keep it up |
thanx for the feed back man just tryin to establish
my self as one of the top lyricist onhere ya know just tired of fake ass lyricist with there simple rhyme yo check my open mic when insanity please |
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