~Babylon~ vs .:Jack Rackam:.
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting.
3 - 0 is a K.O...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-28-04 at 02:31 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

~Babylon~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 02:07 AM.

.:Jack Rackam:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 02:09 AM.

jack's a pretty boy... guess my rhymes are nothin'
yea cause jack's a dime peice... yeah a dime a dozen
his lines like a car accedent, i have to stare cuz
this bitch was on my dick since before my hair was
u need a fair judge,hes a crime against rap,needs a sentence
that werks both ways, cuz in this battle he needs a sentence
greeds aprehensive, and this battle looks green and if
he wers for his money.. hes gonna need a double shift

i cant believe you thought 8 lines was gonna beat me...

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Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

punche's-jack
flow-jack
rhyme's-jack

jack get's my vote based on his attempt, he put alot more effort into his verse. bablyon clearly didnt even try.

Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

jack took this one.. good multi's good punches no personals from either.. but had good flow... babylon had some dope punches but his verse was too short to compare.... good job by both.. but i think jack took this one due to his dope multi's and hard hitting punches.. no hate to either... good job to both of u foo's pz

uppin............................................. .....................

Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

Vote/ Jack Rackam....

easy win. Babylon wrote like he is in gr. 2. No wordplay, no multi.s not really much of anything. Jack came back with mad multi's, and good punches... This was a easy win. Should be a KO no problem

Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

Babz:
jack's a pretty boy... guess my rhymes are nothin'
yea cause jack's a dime peice... yeah a dime a dozen
wasn't feeling this one man
his lines like a car accedent, i have to stare cuz
this bitch was on my dick since before my hair was
lol, dope line, but... you only got that hair yesterday ;)
u need a fair judge,hes a crime against rap,needs a sentence
that werks both ways, cuz in this battle he needs a sentence
and this was pretty wack
greeds aprehensive, and this battle looks green and if
he wers for his money.. hes gonna need a double shift
lol, not bad

Jack:
1ST, a winner always takes the match with heart..so fuck BABYLON
how you gonna win when YOU REPPIN A PLANET THERES NO LIFE ON..!
nice, was good, but I wasn't feeling it that much
this homo's whole flow is a typ'o' like MISSPELLING FLAWS,
ill reveal his cause, cuz this bitchs shit aint being felt like REPELLIN BRA’S,
nice fucking bar man
BELIEVE YA PAST, all ya pathetic drops jus ACHEIVED .. LAUGHS,
PRECEEDING AN ASS..?, cuz your used to RECIEVIN THE SHAFT,!!
again pretty good bar, i felt something missing tho
FUCK YA FORGOTTEN TEXT, your soft like COTTON EFFECTS,
MUST WE FORGET my tex'll bary ya and ask “IS YA BEDROCKIN YET”
lol, this was nice, great set-up
YOUR THINKING YOU WON..?, thats a gay move like DRINKIN MY CUM,
YOUR STEADILY DUMB, n ya shits ignored like your SPEAKIN IN TOUNGE,
this was pretty good
provoke me…!please... my text'll CHARTER PUNCHES in LARGER BUNCHES,
served this DUMMIES like LUNCHES or like empire does by TUMMY CRUNCHES,
LMAO!!!, and ya that's it, lmao
A CHALLENGE IS FUN, but ya flows not noticed like BLEEDING WHEN NUMB,
its CLOSED N DONE, CUZ the only thing you eva OPPOSED WAS YA THUMB,
again, dope
i jus machetti'd ya text, ya neck be next..check the text it remains complex,
but ya physique when flexed still relect you sloppier then speghetti get,
nice, freat set up, punch hit

I think Jack won this, a few good bars from both, but Babz, ya weren't consistent man, and daz, had only 2 bars I wasn't feelin, but they were still pretty good, overall, he ripped it, and won this...

Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

I think that jack got this battle because i feel that he came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt jack got it they were used effectifely and were on point babylon u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to jack good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to him too and flow and structure i'll give to jack rackem.

V/ JR
PEACE.