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Assas-Sin vs Blackmage
Battle Rules:
6 - 12 Lines No Crew/hate/dr Votes No Feedin No Biting g'luck fam...youll need it :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-29-04 at 03:00 AM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. DQ'ed for PMing for votes: Quote:
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Assas-Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 03:10 AM.
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C'mon fam you beatin me?Ya must be gettin Dick votes
Cuz ya cant spit out sumthin hard even if a dick was in ya throat ^^that line was the only one i needed to merk ya ass If Rap was a subject.Im Sorry Black but you would flunk dat class I cant believe you register to rv.com and challenged me I feel like a Role model since he looks up at me And seeing how i am do to da fact Ill leave ya feedback on TheWackestMC sayin how everything iz what you LACK Bitch if you suck on my DICK all day you still wouldnt know how bein hard feels Like So my last wordz from ya Role Model Just Put Down Da Mic |
Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 03:15 AM.
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you not a sniper or a ninja you gassed you a has been
someone should've told your ASS what you gettin your ASS IN even though you an assassin you ain't shit in the dark you ain't fire a lighter with no fluid'll still make a spark i'm the shark of the battles i eat mc's that abuse it i'll eat a rapper and his song piss beats and shit music and i can smell blood and tears i hear the fear in your breath sink down to my level you'll get crushed under these depths it's tragic i spit magic and i kill mc's for fun you in too deep 20,000 leagues under my gun i'm through talkin my lips is sealed after i drop you'll leave here seein spots like cruelle deville thanks for the luck fam, hey no beef dog it's just business |
Voted For: Assas-Sin
Assas-Sin Nice Verse, Some Decent Vocabulary In Here, Punches Was Hitting Kind Of Hard, Structure Was Fucked Up Though, Lol, And You Need To Throw Some Multi's Up In Here With Some Meta's, WordPlay Wasn't To Well, That Will Need Elivation On Black Image Coz, Your Punches Wasn't Hitting Verry Hard, Vocabulary Was Basic, WordPlay Was Alright, Throw In Some Multi's You'll Be Good Need More Work On Your Meta's And Shit Though...Over All Both You Need To Still Elivate But It Was Decent For A Newbie Battle Vote=Assas-sin Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Assas-Sin
assas-sin got this one fa sho its one sided naw just playin it was close ta me cuz blackmage had some cold ass metephors but i give it ta assas-sin Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Assas-Sin
Ok Shit 4rm Tha Both Of You Black Ya Shit Wass Good So Wass AssAsIn But AssAsIn Verse Had Betta Punches,Good Personals Fix Ya Strukture And Both You Up Ya Vokab.................. Black Ya Verse Lacked Decent Punches Ah Mean Tha 1st 2 Lines Wass Good But Ended Off Bad Have Good Punches Throught That Whole Verse Ya Strukture Wass Kool Easy Ta Read Have Some Good Vokab Cus And Some Good Ass Personals............... /V AssAssIn Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Blackmage
umm weak battle ya'll...but dude took it......his first bar was da only good thing in dis battle..no creativity from both of ya'll opener-black structure-black..sin ya lines were 2 long punchlines-black wordplay-nun multies-nun personals-black da second line finisher-sin.. enjoyed-black.... nuf said..links r in my sig return da vote ya'll Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Blackmage
Yo my votes is fo Blackmage heres y Opener:Black Flow:Black Structure:Black Punches:Black Personals:None Closer:Black Black got dis shit hands down......yo Assas-Sin u need to elevate homie no hate..........~1~ Return da favor links in sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
those 2 last votez are unexplain...so they dont count....
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uppin for sum more votez famz...letz close dis battle
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Voted For: Assas-Sin
this is my honest vote right her flow tie rhyming tie punches assas opener-closure assas personals assas imagry niether vocab tie but over all assas and hit up on my link please peace. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Assas-Sin
i vote assa-sin...cuz he had better imagine...wheres the structure at? structure:Blackmage comedy:assa-sin vocab:tie flow:assa-sin Blackmage had to much ordinary rimes but teres one line from assa-sin dat i was desapointed: I cant believe you register to rv.com and challenged me I feel like a Role model since he looks up at me no hate but its the truth...anyway om an honest voter Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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