still there.......collabo
 

this is a CS collab it has me and ecko in it it

chorus: ecko..im also in the background
1 verse: me
2 verse: me
3 verse: ecko


aigth jut listen is all i ask of you guys.....oh yeah leave some feedback also....


http://www.soundclick.com/djemsce

uppin for feedback.......................................... ....

i can barely hear ya hook....first verse...ok...u are so unemotional that it causes pain in my groin area...i couldnt really pick out a "hot line" or something that made me say oOo..second verse...ok...still nothing to make me lift my head and wake up...bust nuts in ya eyes lines is played....third verse...ok...his quality is bad..and he has a nasty reoccuring hiss...u need to up ya game up son...and i aint sayin shit outta hate...its all constructive critiscism....1

uppin for ecko tohear this shit............................

nice shit......i like it....

yeah i shoudl have never over did the chorus...i was just hella bored and didnt feel liike spitting so i just did that..........but yeah i did that shit hella late at nigth...so that is why it may seem kinda off or watever...

ok here we goo
hook was better wtihout dj on it he seemed off beat in a few spots
dj ok punches some were corny cant pick otu a punch and say that line was dope u need to learn snares as does half of rv so dont let that get to u
ecko pretty good hard to understand in come places needs to learn snares too but not a ss bad as dj
ur style kinda made u seem off beat at times

7/10

not liking this,
ya gotta nerdy voice, not much emotion.
not very good presence.
hook would be better with jus ecko.

other kid is dope, flo an delivery with emotion...
take sum bass out ya voice, but ya dope...ecko...

nerdy voice........^^^this said by a robot...............lol

wow and he said i wasn't goood....

yo big props, I was surprised... dj: you have great lyrics in the song, the way you put your words together emphasizing for rhyme, the only problem is you didn't deliver it with enough strength in your words... try and over-pronounce your words more to really make good use of all the rhymes your writing into the track, and maybe put more diaphragm into your delivery so it sounds like you really feeling yourself, so the rest of us can too... good shit though keep dropping. ecko: flow sounded good but quality lacked here, kinda hard to make out- but your style sounds like its heading in good directions... keep em comin- 1

well thanks for the feed back.....this was a kinda of a free style spit.........so that is why...i wasnt really feelignthis bet either not really my style......