Lil Nigga:Tha Facts
 

yeah i wanna dedicate dis 1 to my nephews Jayden and Addonnis, tha lil niggaz comin up in tha world


And I rememba
way way back in tha days b4 u was born nigga
me N ya moms would fight til tha early dawn nigga
I was a hateful little mothafucka,kickin it at tha crib
no remorse 2 her or my otha brothaz.....4 shit i did
but people change 4 tha bettta in a matter of time
at age 5 i started puttin in time n writin my rhymes
i neva dreamed i could make so many things happen
all through sittin n thinkin expressin myself n rappin
now journey with me 2 tha dark side of my struggle
times was hard
i needed love so bein a thug was added 2 my hustle
not a day rolls by i dont regret some of tha shit i did
life was a whirlwind just turned 13 and almost had a kid
i must admit life was crazy when i was outside of home
and i gave it up so u lil niggaz aint gotta learn on ya own

See life's hard at times, but neva give up
Thats y i'm usin my rhymes 2 help u live up
2 ya potential credentials givin u a betta life
than i had... cuz lil niggaz u dont live twice
and that's that

I see u every day on my way back from school
walkin da streets in ya fitted thinkin u reaaal cool
but lil nigga get ya head right, get in dem books
u cant read and u 6 years old, take a long look
at yaself and wut u doin 2 ya brain, it aint good mayne
wuteva u wanna do lil nigga i'm sure u could mayne
u tossin a pigskin like 30 yards already........damn
nephew u can grow up 2 b a reall successful man
but money's nothin without brains 2 know how its spent
buyin a lexus when u know u aint got a way 2 pay ya rent
ya momma tries u should give her some kinda credit
she brought u in 2 this world nigga and neva 4get it
she wants 2 see u make somethin of yaself, i do 2
i guess wut i'm tryna say is my lil nigga i love u
cuz like me ya pops dont give a fuck, yet u comin up
but slow down and live life day by day u just a young buck
and when u know u wrong lil nigga stop fightin back
already cussin no wonda u gettin ya head smacked
it aint 2 hurt u its 2 let u know who's in command
when u get olda 1 day nigga u'll undastand tha plan

See life's hard at times, but neva give up
Thats y i'm usin my rhymes 2 help u live up
2 ya potential credentials givin u a betta life
than i had... cuz lil niggaz u dont live twice
and that's that

uppin dis 1..........anotha open mic on tha way in bout 30 minutes.

damn drop feedback if u gonna view it please.....................................uppin

yup............no feedback like i thought

ight i was feelin dis one da opener was kinda sorry doe but otha den dat it was pretty good i know wat u mean by yo verse same thang kinda wit my lil sister but dont forget to leave a link fo a feedback you did da day u posted dis

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y we gotta leave links 2 feedback we posted on otha peoples stuff? i think dats pointless.

me to but ey dats da rules

uppin in dis biaaaaaaaaaaaatch

i wasnt really feeling this one, sorry man. you came weak in this piece because the bars were real strecthed and at some points, the flow was off. i did like the concept though, nice job on that part. but in this piece, you needed shorter length of bars because the strecthing threw off the flow at some parts. the rhyme scheme was too basic as well. stay up.

7/10

aight dawg........i just did dis 1 2 b postin somethin n keepin active tho