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Random Thoughts of Mine
u prewrite the best shit u'd supply to us-but lie&stuff...
by saying thatchu' key'd it up...while being high&drunk... but u lying chumps...tried for months&post it in the end... to make us think that u spittin dope shit when u bent... but truthfully,sober or not,u cant flow freed for nothing... so please stop fronting................. cuz u aint holding real liquor-sipping O.E's or something... son i blaze haze&down the henny-butchu' clowns'll envy... when i vote fair but blunt-cuz i cant lay it down so gently... thatchu' wack as fuck-so wrap it up-son ur rhymes is gay... since u tell me gangsta punches&grimey lines are played... so love it or hate it-but face it-if what i serve&live is hated... theres nothing dope about it-when u urban bitches fake it... either that or ur the type-who's quick to call me a 'net thug'... but ironically to 'face ur crew'-online was where ur set was... |
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can i get a little feedback?.......................
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hmmnnn nothin special man, but i see what ur sayin......theres alot of cats thathave excuses on alot of things here......peep my two pieces...hip hop warrior and final review...trust me, u wont be disappointed
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thanx DA^^..................uppin for more feedback
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this wasnt that great but not that bad either it was decent and just like DA said i can relate to the topic... but i thought you could have done better just keep droppin ish
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dam.........can i get more feedback or somthin?............
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this is ok, you have some allright rhyme's in it, flow could be a bit better,aswell as structure.
overall 6/10 return the feed,link in the sig. |
yo this wasnt all that hot but what made it a decent drop what the reality in it
thats is true niggas do front like that but u kjnow ho wu know when they didnt key it its when its all on a topic whenits not a radom spit becuase u cannot free something one topic u will veer off any ways thats some real shit right there |
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