plustwo vs Assas-Sin
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew/hate/dr votez
No Recycling
No Biting and No feedin

G'luck fam...you might need it :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-28-04 at 04:24 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Assas-Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 02:42 PM.

plustwo has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 02:57 PM.

Fam whatz goin on in ya sloppy head
Doin dat kind of shit get ya ass merk white T be turnd to Red
C'mon you couldnt spit Raw even if ya threw up uncook meat Really when da slugz rain out you run.Just imagine if i brought da heat
Ya record is 2-5.Shit i thought you were dope since youre da Highest
Damn fam thatz da baddest record Ive seen since ya last Alias
You takin dis win from me only happens in ya dreamz
Cuz youre wacker than that one 112 song Peachez N Cream
C'mon on faggot stop frontin like you all hard
Saw ya on da streetz and you was carrying a ChuckyCheese Card
Fam da closest you get to havin a chick on ya dick
Iz a dragqueen suckin on ya dick when youre pullin HIS wig

....nuff said...

G'luck

i'm going to asass-in ate this faggot, i asked for 10 lines,
i aint gonna let you slip cos im dressed to the nines,
taking your life, youve been capped, bagged and buried,
all you can rhyme is boys and toys, but my rhymes are varied,
just face it im better, im the guy that makes your bitch wetter,
unilliterate, you cant tell the difference between normal and BLOCK letters,
line seven, i'm taking you too heaven, pretty boy needs to stop rap,
you need to stop that, cos i'd happily clap you with 2 gats,
your new to rv, it's best you leave, you'll never be respected,when people see me murk your ass, you'll be nothin but rejected,

aight sorry bout the flow it was a bit choppy blah my first battle in ages am jus finding my feet... hope you like

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aight good verse lets get some votes on this aight.. uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

This was feedback posted for plustwo
 

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Voted For: Assas-Sin

I Like Assas-sin'z Verse But also heres My Explanation

My Vote

Personals....
Punchez
Multi's
Vocab.,.....All Go To Assasin
Well The rest Is History Bcuz Its very clear to see who won this battle

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^^thnx...you should've voted Acuity o well lol.

uppin on dis battle dont sleep on it..leave link and ill return da favor...

still uppin dont sleep on dis famz...

Voted For: Assas-Sin

ASSAS-SIN GOT THIS HE GOT EM WITH EVERY LINE CUZ THA OTHA ONE AINT EVEN SOUND RIGHT BUT ASSAS-SIN WON HE DID EM IN SO GhOOD SHIT DAWG....LOOK OUT ON CHUCK LOW VS. DEATH
CHUCK LOW VS. KKKHATER

Voted For: Assas-Sin

hmm not too great of a battle but heres how i break it down

plustwo
i'm going to asass-in ate this faggot, i asked for 10 lines,
i aint gonna let you slip cos im dressed to the nines,
not a good opener....self glory

taking your life, youve been capped, bagged and buried,
all you can rhyme is boys and toys, but my rhymes are varied,
hmm...not too good man....self glory again at the end of 2nd line

just face it im better, im the guy that makes your bitch wetter,
unilliterate, you cant tell the difference between normal and BLOCK letters,
decent punch.....hit ok.....

line seven, i'm taking you too heaven, pretty boy needs to stop rap,
you need to stop that, cos i'd happily clap you with 2 gats,
gunplay...not good...

your new to rv, it's best you leave, you'll never be respected,when people see me murk your ass, you'll be nothin but rejected,
structure was off.....kinda of downing yourself on this bar...but still hit ok

assassin......
Fam whatz goin on in ya sloppy head
Doin dat kind of shit get ya ass merk white T be turnd to Red
played man...not a good opener

C'mon you couldnt spit Raw even if ya threw up uncook meat Really when da slugz rain out you run.Just imagine if i brought da heat
1st line decent...2nd line not good...but 1st line hit ok

Ya record is 2-5.Shit i thought you were dope since youre da Highest
Damn fam thatz da baddest record Ive seen since ya last Alias
lol pretty decent....ok personal

You takin dis win from me only happens in ya dreamz
Cuz youre wacker than that one 112 song Peachez N Cream
not good.....

C'mon on faggot stop frontin like you all hard
Saw ya on da streetz and you was carrying a ChuckyCheese Card
fake personal....didnt hit too good

Fam da closest you get to havin a chick on ya dick
Iz a dragqueen suckin on ya dick when youre pullin HIS wig
hit decent...could have been worded better....


ok so basically my vote goes to assassin for having better structure....his punches hit harder....and plustwo had too much self glory in his verse.....sorry plustwo...no hate...just how i felt about the battle......

Voted For: Assas-Sin

This easily goes to assas-Sin. He didn't bitch in his verse. Plustwo was bitching about lines with his opener. The punches go to Assas-Sin. Plustwo was wack in every catagory. Nuff said. Please don't say that. You ain't trrop But in other words this battle was all belonging to Assas-Sin.
Vote= Assas-Sin.

Voted For: Assas-Sin

plustwo:
im not sure what that was an attemp of nothing but it was crap honestly you need to learn punchlines and wordplay..possibly even stucture and flow....your flow was good but still....lol....vocab was alright not close to mine but its good...i guess...no hate

Assas-sin
hmmm alright....not the greatest....coulda of done better lol....vocab was pretty good and your pucnhes werent really there to much i seen a few but there ight....wordplay i didnt see anything witty there...some pretty good metas pretty good verse....pz no hate to both

return the favour links in the sig...pz