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Legend vs J~FOUR
Battle Rules:
6-10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Due Tonight Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-28-04 at 11:40 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
J~FOUR has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 08:43 PM.
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Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 08:47 PM.
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While ya squeeze dicks for cum emcees is who I’m stranglin
While my rhymes give ya a shock like the kite and Ben Franklin You the Champion of being whack without having to snatch the belt Not that active but you social bitch just like Miss Roosevelt I'm off the hook little fishy. You lost in my ocean just like Nemo my votes get approved and your just stay gets alot of being veto’d man admit it you are wack. You’ll never fit in not even here You suck dick for four and we all can see that is so clear Your life is history goin against me nigka. Don't be so afraid I mean they're are some verses in this world that are even more played Shit. I've never used this verse in a battle. So I use it now. :D |
1. professional wrestler randy orton is self proclaimed legend killer
Ya think you gonna win? must be the coke-you-snortin Cause, I stay "killen legends" like ~Randy Orton~ Important, when your crew is you.. the-whole-portion Cause I'm "killing New Breed" like a ~species-abortion~ Ya mind-distortin', leavin ya "thoughts all mangled" Cause My "punches more direct" than ~T.V. Cable~ Legend, You Got "Disabled flow" Like "Amputated Dicks" Cause i always "take out the trash".. them ~overatted pricks~ Attention !!!! ...Theres a New Breed of wack-emcees who universally beating-bars.. ...And if you askin me? I stay "Over Legend's" like "Cheating On Stars"... Good Luck Duke... |
ooooo eeeeee...... goood drop mang.. i like the i didnt use this verse line.. lol bitch.. jp.. good drop fam.. ~1~
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lol. Yeah joker. lol. Uhm. Yeah uppyn this shit...
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yo people uppyn...................................
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Voted For: Legend
Aight this was a ok battle...Structure goes to Legend Im feelin his style on dis one...Punches where weak from both so I say it was a tie with that topic..Flow goes to J4..Vocab goes to legend he kept it down and good..J4 had decent vocab..Personals was a tie...Multis N metas was lackin on both sides so i tied that up Structure-Legend Punches-Tie Flow-J4 Vocab-Legend Personals-tie Multis-Tie Metas-tie overall this was close but i give it to Legend V/legend http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=168722 Return da favor fam Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: J~FOUR
aii this is how i feel Legend I Liked your veres ya structure was nice but you came very weak on punchez..............thats something i think you should work on and personals bcuz you seriously lack the use of good punchez ad personals.... J~FOUR I Like your verse you came decent wit some punchez and flows but your Multi's were weak and some other things were lacked but other than that yo veres was ok and thats why you get my verse *********************************************** The Favor Better Be return or else lol j/k*************** * but plz do im askin as a favor plz do return the favor....peace************************************ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
thanx for an honest vote. Uppyn......................
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will the Favor Be Returned?.,bcuz i need the favor so plz return it
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^^stop beggin let da nigka decide if he wantz to lol...If you do return da favor my link is in da post
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Uppyn.............................................
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Voted For: J~FOUR
i wuz looking forward to this battle...damn, legend you shoodve came harder mayne...j~four took this one heres a lil breakdown opener:tie multies:j punches:j vocab:j closer:j j-good verse, nice multies...also had real good wordplay, and sum nice punches too...i didnt see anything that needed major improvement legend-couldve came lot harder...had a few good punches but not enuff, also couldve improved on the vocab...needed some multies in your verse cuz it had none...no hate, but this might be one of your wackest battle verses that you've spit on this site both-both people coodve improved their openers...but thats about the only thing, that "both" could improve on lol....dont think i voted for j~four cuz randy orton is from stl, and i love wrestling...lmao v/j~four Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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