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Acuity vs Assas-Sin
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10-14 Lines No Crew/hate/DR Votes No Recycling No Biting and no feedin Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 12-28-04 at 10:09 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Assas-Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 09:40 PM.
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C'mon dawg you couldnt spit hot when ya body was ova heated
Ya changed ya name to Acuity cuz you kept gettin defeated Beatin me is like you gettin being betta than me See that will neva happen when ya fake ass keeps biting Ill clap you with da tipy toe of da 9 Youre my bitch so when i say sit you know ya place in line Takin me on was da dumbest decission ya made so far Well maybe not?I think da first one was when ya went in da Gay Bar Fuckin faggot get ya stack up before you get clap up And if this lose doesnt sink in low enough to make ya throw up Backup Punk before i show ya how many bones ima break You challeneged me so no show on me herb cuz itz too late... ...wrote it in like 10 minutes so its w.e fam... |
Acuity has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 09:43 PM.
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Lookin 4 rhyming classics, dont waste ur time checkin drops by Assa-sin
His punches are played and past-it, like he pickin up punches from the jurassic Ur crews a sham, u make MC's laugh, like ur roster is a set from Def Comedy Jam Wack City is ur native-land, milked lines like they coming from a mammary gland Ima taint ur so far perfect score, throw ur head and ur so-called rhymes to the hoards Show RV Spittin Anonymous means fuk~all, like Bush claimin justifications for War Assasin so ur used to fatalities, testin me shows a serious lack of rationality Ur name lacks originality, ima giv u a loss, bring ur record a degree of proportionality In ur raps basics fail to be applied, u cud get merked by any MC worldwide U couldn't transform and spit monstrous lines, even if u drank a potion like Jekyll and Hyde I leave you in a shudder, your steering an ill-fated course, like u broke ur rudder Spittin Anonymous brotha, cos lame and ur name are synonymous with eachotha chek da wordplay n personal punches (oh n his crew is Spitterz anonymous) Good votes plz -they'll b returned |
Voted For: Acuity
acuity had better hits this was close but acuity came a lil bit harder....tha last 2 bars were off the HOOK....so u get my vote look out back chuck low vs. denied truth chuck low vs. kkkhater chuck low vs. death |
^^w.e fam...you shouldve said bad structure on da last 2 bars but itz all good....still uppin
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Voted For: Acuity
Good Job Man.. Assas~sin rushed his verse wicked.. structure was off wich ruined the flow.. Some decent personals but nothin to over excell acuitys verse.. Acuity Your verse was good, good flow structure good punches and wordplay.. It Was On Target the Whole Time never slipped.. great job on this.. VOTE JFOUR vs Legend.. Battle is hott and needs votes.. Links in my sig !!!!!! |
Voted For: Assas-Sin
i think assas-sin got this one his punches got em hit hard straight to the point metas were good flow was tight rhymes were ill goood job kid best line-----Takin me on was da dumbest decission ya made so far Well maybe not?I think da first one was when ya went in da Gay Bar |
Voted For: Assas-Sin
i say that assassin won becuz he had better wordplay he did stretch it but i was there wit him. i think both vreses need structure and multis. punches went to assasin becuz he started witone and they werent played out like the jarrasic park stupid suck ass one so overall assassin won |
uppin for votez famz...
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Voted For: Acuity
Lookin 4 rhyming classics, dont waste ur time checkin drops by Assa-sin His punches are played and past-it, like he pickin up punches from the jurassic multis was aight, punch aint connect picking up punches from jurassic WTF??? weak..... Ur crews a sham, u make MC's laugh, like ur roster is a set from Def Comedy Jam Wack City is ur native-land, milked lines like they coming from a mammary gland set up line good again punch aint connect N i wasnt feeling it... Ima taint ur so far perfect score, throw ur head and ur so-called rhymes to the hoards Show RV Spittin Anonymous means fuk~all, like Bush claimin justifications for War set-up line weak but this time punch connected decent.... Assasin so ur used to fatalities, testin me shows a serious lack of rationality Ur name lacks originality, ima giv u a loss, bring ur record a degree of proportionality decent vocab flow off thou.... In ur raps basics fail to be applied, u cud get merked by any MC worldwide U couldn't transform and spit monstrous lines, even if u drank a potion like Jekyll and Hyde decent... I leave you in a shudder, your steering an ill-fated course, like u broke ur rudder Spittin Anonymous brotha, cos lame and ur name are synonymous with eachotha best bar u had preety good.......... man u had alot of bars that could of hit way better and all and some just aint make no sense and was weak as-hell last 2 bars was when u picked it up finally but it was to late... 6.5/10 ********************************************** C'mon dawg you couldnt spit hot when ya body was ova heated Ya changed ya name to Acuity cuz you kept gettin defeated thats decent... Beatin me is like you gettin being betta than me See that will neva happen when ya fake ass keeps biting flow off and punch was weak... Ill clap you with da tipy toe of da 9 Youre my bitch so when i say sit you know ya place in line flow ok, no punch Takin me on was da dumbest decission ya made so far Well maybe not?I think da first one was when ya went in da Gay Bar weak, gay bar? weak.... Fuckin faggot get ya stack up before you get clap up And if this lose doesnt sink in low enough to make ya throw up clap up?-throw-up? dont not rhyme for shit..... plus u should of re-worded that last line.... Backup Punk before i show ya how many bones ima break You challeneged me so no show on me herb cuz itz too late... decent ending.... mang after i saw acuity verse i thought u had this win hands down i even copy and paste the vote from acuity to u'rs only to copy and paste it back now that im done reading this shit... honestly ya both lacked alot word but ass-sin u had no good punch, some of ya lines need to be re-worded and just think out-side the box word... |
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Voted For: Acuity
Assas-in um not to much decentsy in there..theres a few nice lines with soem tight wittyness in them...but no real punches or anythign well actuall yo be honest theres one good line in there it was all good tho...your vocab was good and so was your flow and stucture..nice verse tho..no hate pz Acuity hmmm nice verse actually fianlly i see hwo good you are lol....your punches were tight and so were your wordplay...some real creativity in them lines...you had soem good stucture and flow also...plus you used some pretty tight vocabulary in there...no ahte to both pz return the favour links in the sig |
Voted For: Acuity
man not a hard decison....acuity.....u had a hellll a lot of punches beta than his.no hate.....but u did... had flow,,,, gud vocab best line wuz- Lookin 4 rhyming classics, dont waste ur time checkin drops by Assa-sin His punches are played and past-it, like he pickin up punches from the jurassic lol^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ haha gud shitholla bak wif a vote against me and unknown.....aiight |
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