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I.D. 12-29-04 04:21 AM

Kordozar vs Sticky Bandit
 
Battle Rules:

10 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Beef
No Dickriding

Minimum posts to vote: 800

Check in by: 01-01-05 at 04:21 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 12-29-04 04:23 AM

Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 04:23 AM.

I.D. 12-29-04 04:39 AM

You Aint Spit Yet, Alright...................

Kordozar 12-29-04 05:04 AM

Ya Onli Chances Of Bein On Top Is Goin First With Verse..
U Half Way Dead,I Give You Tha Cash So Ya Family Can Get Ya Herse..
And I'll Throw Ya Organs In Tha Water With Tha Rest Of Ya "Smurfs"..
Tha Chicks Pics He Showed Was Fake,Cus He Dates On Tha Computer..
This Loser,Cant Rap So He Should Attend Ta "Jazz"Like Carlos Boozer...
A Skittle,His Gangs Wass Rtc,Gsw,Alkqn Than Hoover...
He Even Got His Self Confused,His Locations Wass Nc,Lb,And Now Vegas...
Hes A "Pussy",That Hangs With "Pussies"Like Female 3Some Rapist..
Original "Fruit Loop",He Wass On Tha Cereal Box With "Tocann"..
Tha Pc Is Life,Cus Even His Pic Shows That He Onli Has 2 Friends..
"Here He Come",He Wont Stand A Chance If I Lended Him A Extra Pair Of Legs..
Its No Hope,Hes Close Ta Bien "Toast" Like Bacon And Eggs..
Begs Fa Pc Chicks,Cuz U Got It Bad..
DaNewBreed562?Guess Thats A New Type Of Fags..
21-0,Most His Wins Came 4rm Pepl With Under 600 Posts..
And He Dick Sucks Ta Get A Win,Doin Pm Fa Votes...

..Get Him Out Of Hurr..
..Explanations..
His Nick Name Wass Smurf
He Got A Girl On Tha Pc
Been In Different Gangs..Rtc(Blue)Gsw(Purple)Alkqn(Yellow)Hoover(Blu e)All Skittle Colors
Lived In Nc,Long Beach,And Las Vegas
In His Pic He With 2 Guys(Friends)Ill Put His Pic Up Hur..
Aim Sn DaNewBreed562..Dats All

System 12-29-04 12:47 PM

Sticky Bandit has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 12:47 PM.

I.D. 12-29-04 12:48 PM


Even His Net Life Shows He Got A Wife, Commitment On The Net??
I'll Put A Knife To Your Moms Rectum, And Slice Your Wifes Neck...
You Got A Net Life, Coz Your On The PC 24/7 365 Days A Year.....
I Can't Here Shit You Saying Like...... Handicaps With No Ears...
Cheating Bitch IM'ing Me To Get Voted Against That Nigka Chaos
Go Back To "Wrapping" Your "Subway Sandwitches" Fati Lay Off
You Beating Me???Your Imagination Must Be Like Disney Pictures
Coz Your Lyrical Scriptures Is Like Special Ed Kids, Painting Picture
Your Writing Is Crooked, You Couldn't Write Straight If Rap Was Stencils
You Pre-Write Lyrics From Artist And Re-Use Uhm Like Recycled Pencils
Your Another Parallel, You Couldn't Elevate If You Rode In A Plain......
It's Simple To See Like Gladiators In Spain...I'm Killing Him In Pain....
Mathematical Equation But Yet You Couldn't Solve An Exponent
You Couldn't Put A Bar Together If It Came With One Component
Your Career's Looking Ugly, Like Ya Net Bitches Face..... Tiesha..
You Fucking Homo Bitch, Hired Michael Jackson To Bleach Ya....


Explanations
He's Got A Net Girl Which He Say's Is His Wife
He's On The Computer All Day Coz I Leave, Then Like I Be Back At Night And He Tells Me He Is Still On
He IM'ed Me For Votes On That Battle With Him And Chaos...
His Name Is Fati, And Sub Way Sandwitches Is A New Diet Plan, And He's Not Rapping, He Wrapping...
He Pre Writes His Shit Then Posts It On IM For Me To See It
In A Battle With Parallel And Oreo, Oreo Was Like No Wonder You Can't Elivate Your Parallel, And A Plain Elivates, But He Can't
His Alias Name Is Exponent Which I Beat Before
Components Is Like Parts
His Girl Tiesha Is His Net Wife Or What Ever
Michael Jackson Is A Homo And He Was Bleached

I.D. 12-29-04 01:33 PM

U, U,U,U,UPPING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ltizzle 12-29-04 01:47 PM

This was feedback posted for Sticky Bandit
 
ay i cant vote but jus dropin da feed on dis one...
sticky won this, his verse was tight all da way through, nice punches and flow, everything was hot...
kordozar, your flow fell off towards the end and in certain parts of your verse...it was still nice, but sticky's was jus hotter...

Kordozar 12-29-04 04:28 PM

HaHa Funni Verses 4rm Tha Both Ya But Sticky Bandit Some Ya Explanations Iss Fraud,He Dont Be On Tha Pc All Day He Get On Around 11/12 You Never Beat Him You Beat Me His Alias Isnt Exponent Thass Mih Name He Never Pre Writ A Verse And Showed You Lmao Thas All That Are Fraud I Know Cus Thass Mih Brotha Good Battle Both Of You HaHa Shit Wass Funni As Hell.................................

EyeDentity 12-29-04 04:29 PM

This was feedback posted for Sticky Bandit
 
Viewing The Polls..........................................

EyeDentity 12-29-04 04:30 PM

I Know Shit, I Keep Getting You Mixed Up With Him Fucker

I.D. 12-29-04 07:33 PM

Upping This Shit Mang.................................

Sik Wit It 12-29-04 10:39 PM

Voted For: Kordozar

Even His Net Life Shows He Got A Wife, Commitment On The Net??
I'll Put A Knife To Your Moms Rectum, And Slice Your Wifes Neck...
decent
You Got A Net Life, Coz Your On The PC 24/7 365 Days A Year.....
I Can't Here Shit You Saying Like...... Handicaps With No Ears...

Cheating Bitch IM'ing Me To Get Voted Against That Nigka Chaos
Go Back To "Wrapping" Your "Subway Sandwitches" Fati Lay Off
nice…
You Beating Me???Your Imagination Must Be Like Disney Pictures
Coz Your Lyrical Scriptures Is Like Special Ed Kids, Painting Picture

Your Writing Is Crooked, You Couldn't Write Straight If Rap Was Stencils
You Pre-Write Lyrics From Artist And Re-Use Uhm Like Recycled Pencils
decent…
Your Another Parallel, You Couldn't Elevate If You Rode In A Plain......
It's Simple To See Like Gladiators In Spain...I'm Killing Him In Pain....

Mathematical Equation But Yet You Couldn't Solve An Exponent
You Couldn't Put A Bar Together If It Came With One Component
decent
Your Career's Looking Ugly, Like Ya Net Bitches Face..... Tiesha..
You Fucking Homo Bitch, Hired Michael Jackson To Bleach Ya....



Ya Onli Chances Of Bein On Top Is Goin First With Verse..
U Half Way Dead,I Give You Tha Cash So Ya Family Can Get Ya Herse..
decent…
And I'll Throw Ya Organs In Tha Water With Tha Rest Of Ya "Smurfs"..
Tha Chicks Pics He Showed Was Fake,Cus He Dates On Tha Computer..

This Loser,Cant Rap So He Should Attend Ta "Jazz"Like Carlos Boozer...
A Skittle,His Gangs Wass Rtc,Gsw,Alkqn Than Hoover...
decent…
He Even Got His Self Confused,His Locations Wass Nc,Lb,And Now Vegas...
Hes A "Pussy",That Hangs With "Pussies"Like Female 3Some Rapist..

Original "Fruit Loop",He Wass On Tha Cereal Box With "Tocann"..
Tha Pc Is Life,Cus Even His Pic Shows That He Onli Has 2 Friends..

"Here He Come",He Wont Stand A Chance If I Lended Him A Extra Pair Of Legs..
Its No Hope,Hes Close Ta Bien "Toast" Like Bacon And Eggs..
decent…
Begs Fa Pc Chicks,Cuz U Got It Bad..
DaNewBreed562?Guess Thats A New Type Of Fags..
make your flow longer…
21-0,Most His Wins Came 4rm Pepl With Under 600 Posts..
And He Dick Sucks Ta Get A Win,Doin Pm Fa Votes...
decent…

Overall…both of you need to elevate & work
on your vocab n’ shit…nice persona’s tho…but Kordo
took this one just by a hair tho…


Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Kordozar 12-29-04 10:49 PM

Uppin This Shit Word!!!!.............

OrEo da cookie 12-29-04 11:56 PM

Voted For: Sticky Bandit

damn son,

stick took this one, no need for you to explain,
i feel kon cam kinda weak but his verse was stiil hot,

meta4= sticky got them all over
wordplay=sticky
structure=sticky, i hate prple though
opener and closer=sticky, some hot shit man
personals=tid, yall bith got the personals down

best lines from both

You Beating Me???Your Imagination Must Be Like Disney Pictures
Coz Your Lyrical Scriptures Is Like Special Ed Kids, Painting Picture
^made me luagh

lay off using other peoples names such as pussy parrelel, i almost aint vote for you there

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