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DatboiRob vs Assas-Sin
Battle Rules:
10-14 Lines No Crew/hate/dr Votes No Recycling No Biting and no feedin g'luck fam Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 12-29-04 at 04:02 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
DatBoiRob has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 02:06 PM.
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Assas-Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 02:08 PM.
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Nigga I Can Make U A President And Me Be An Assasin
Lets See How U Can Hunt And Kill People When Ya Neck And Ya Head Is Verbally Smashed In I Can See Ya Pussy 5 Dollar Ass Gettin Cashed In U Always Talkin Bout Ya Dick And How U Got Tricks Ill Give U A Case Of Slurred Speech Like Slick Rick Ya Verse I Didnt Look Cuz Ya Bad Shit Is Attractive Ima Help Ya Ass Learn When U Lose, Choose A Casket Dont Let Ya Mouth Slip Or Catch A Mean Clip Button Up That Lip Or Get Ya Sleen Put By Ya Hip Nigga Ima Give U A Bib And Put U In Ya Crib I Better See U Leave Rv For A While Like Takin A Trip Ya Flow Is Fuckin Jacked Up Even When It Is Bitten U Betta Grow Up Cuz Im Never Babysittin |
explanations
i meant to say
( put ya spleen by ya hip ) THAT IS ALL THE EXPLANATIONS I THINK |
Damn That Was A Wack Verse. I Wasnt Feelin That At All. Pleazz Dont Judge My Talent By This Verse. *yuck*
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C'mon fam how you claimin to be Dat-Boi-Rob
Ya uglyass cant get a bitch so ya sick of being lonely like feild mob Yung nigga watcha doing takin on Assas-Sin You gettin a win against me even makes Elvis start laughin Ya record 0-2 so how eva gonna get to da top Especially when most of ya ryhmes PLAYOUT like Hood Hop Im takin it easy on you so nigga dont get full of ya self You're my book so right about now my punches puttin you back on da shelf C'mon dawg im ova ya rap game level Im high as heaven when ya wack ass is low as da devil But aint meanin ya hot cuz you aint that by far Ya couldnt be hot even if you where in a ova heated NASCAR Da votez comin from you iz da only kind dat loves to ride Cuz when I take ya to da circus all you roll on is da DickRyde |
uppin for votez famz...
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Voted For: Assas-Sin
Assa-sin: Punches were too basic man...I think you can do way better than this...Try being a little more creative with ya punches homie...ya structure was fine, as was the flow, and even tho some of your punches were played, they were still better than the other dude... DatBoiRob: Punches were not there...I saw not a single decent punch throughout your entire verse...structure and flow at the beginning was fucked, but then got better...Neither one of you guys had any personals...Both verses need elevation...1 |
Voted For: Assas-Sin
datboirob: um nothign great your stucture and flow ere a combined alright....your punches were weak..but it was alright with some of the shit you spat.....no hate but you didnt have a chance assasin is really an assasin word..lol pz Assassin hmm pretty good your stucture was ight....nice punches pretty godo with the vocabulary and metaphoical issues;)...lol....you got this simpley tho....nice work with that shiat....no hate to both pz... return the favour...thanks...links in the sig |
uppin for votes...dont sleep
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Voted For: Assas-Sin
aight okay battle ya'll....i think sin took dis bcuzz rob u weren't tryin da be creative fam u aint have no punchlines or nothin n datz like da most important shit in battlin...nahmean...sin u had a lil creativness but ya puncline concepts are played fam or either corny n u gota work on ya ryhme scheme just givin u my opinion opener-sin...rob ya first bar aint ryhme structure-rob punchlines-sin wordplay-nun multis-rob he had like 1 creativity-sin personals-nun finisher-a tie both were kind of weak enjoyed-sin...he got dis links r in da sig...return da favor ya'll |
uppin for votez famz...
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still uppin for votez fam...leave link and ill return da favor
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still uppin for votez famz...
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