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String9487 vs The Dex
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6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 75 Check in by: 12-29-04 at 06:57 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 05:58 PM.
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The Dex has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 06:02 PM.
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Heres String and his girls, their 87 and 94
that string of words, strung together without even a chore Practising necrophiliac,* sicker than sex with ya gran Menage a trios without the bras with the blue-rinse clan Ticking ya brain away, thinking an getting tied up in knots Quicker than a thick liquor I pour out the stuff that’s hot! Melt you with my words that stopping ya success Intimidating you with a curse placed like you Macbeth You getting left by Dex lying face down on the mat, You been caught it over, we know your acts actually whack! *necrophiliac= someone whos has sex with the dead |
CHECK CHECK,
eh, doggy u aint hard,.. you just a thug in a dress i got an ACE up my sleeve that'll SHUFFLE THE DEX son, ima spit that flame, that'll bubble ya sweat im a old head in rap, u aint got ya stubble in yet u try to hype yaself up, but yet u borin still n ya Wins are leaner than the meat off the Foreman Grill...HOLLA |
uppin real quick battle yall should get votin on it soon
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Voted For: The Dex
The Dex Took This Bcus He Came Harder,His Punches Wass Hittin Ok,String Didnt Have N e Punches,Dex Vokab Wass Koo,String No Vokab,Strukture Tied Between Tha 2 Both Wasnt Good,Overall Both Of You Could Work On Ya Punches And Personals Dex In Tha 1st 2 Lines Is Wea You Had Personals Afta That Ya Verse Fell Off A Lil Bit Keep A Good Overall Verse And Keep Ya Personals,Punches,Vokab And Strukture Good Throughout Tha Whole Thing..........String Dont Try That Street Rappin Shit,Iss Wack On Text Onli In Some Lines Noth Threw Tha Whole Thing Use Vokab Ya Vokab Sucked,Use Decent Personals And Fix Ya Strukture Cus No Hate Honest Vote........ /V The Dex.....Return Tha Favor Link In Mih Sig |
Voted For: String9487
eh, doggy u aint hard,.. you just a thug in a dress i got an ACE up my sleeve that'll SHUFFLE THE DEX son, ima spit that flame, that'll bubble ya sweat im a old head in rap, u aint got ya stubble in yet u try to hype yaself up, but yet u borin still n ya Wins are leaner than the meat off the Foreman Grill...HOLLA ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ha lol nice punches, had some ill wordplays to go with it. Flow was pretty nice. Heres String and his girls, their 87 and 94 that string of words, strung together without even a chore Practising necrophiliac,* sicker than sex with ya gran Menage a trios without the bras with the blue-rinse clan Ticking ya brain away, thinking an getting tied up in knots Quicker than a thick liquor I pour out the stuff that’s hot! Melt you with my words that stopping ya success Intimidating you with a curse placed like you Macbeth You getting left by Dex lying face down on the mat, You been caught it over, we know your acts actually whack! ^^^^^^^^^^^^ alright. good flow. Punches were "eh" okay. nothing really expose to me, work on that. overall= okay not to dick-ride or anything, but honest vote is that string got you. let me break it down The dex you had punches with some wordplays and personals but they were played out Practising necrophiliac,* sicker than sex with ya gran Menage a trios without the bras with the blue-rinse clan Ticking ya brain away, thinking an getting tied up in knots Quicker than a thick liquor I pour out the stuff that’s hot! Melt you with my words that stopping ya success Intimidating you with a curse placed like you Macbeth You getting left by Dex lying face down on the mat, You been caught it over, we know your acts actually whack! ^^^^^^^^^^ that whole part was played , played punches no hate fam String came with personals and ill wordplays, had some good punches. Most of all it was entertaining to me. lol. u try to hype yaself up, but yet u borin still n ya Wins are leaner than the meat off the Foreman Grill ^^^^^^^^^^ shit was mad funny. The closer was dope as hell but *AHEM* The dex your punches came played, really wasnt effective but you've tried. String i say good verse work on NOT stretching your lines. I give this to string basically cause of harder punches. No hate dex my opinion peace~!! |
Voted For: The Dex
The Dex - Good spit, had a good flow to it, and some hard hitten punches. Best Line - Ticking ya brain away, thinking an getting tied up in knots Quicker than a thick liquor I pour out the stuff that’s hot! Worst Line - Heres String and his girls, their 87 and 94 that string of words, strung together without even a chore String - iight spit, a good flow, and some punches that wernt hitten to bad. Best Line - eh, doggy u aint hard,.. you just a thug in a dress i got an ACE up my sleeve that'll SHUFFLE THE DEX WOrst Line - son, ima spit that flame, that'll bubble ya sweat im a old head in rap, u aint got ya stubble in yet Overall - close battle here, both came pretty decent. But I gotta give this to the Dex. He had the better flow and the harder hittening punches. String, Ive seen alot better from you... step up on the punches/personals. Vote - The Dex |
This was feedback posted for The Dex
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hahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahaahaha ZZZZZzzzzzZZZZZzzzzZZZZZzzzzZZZZZzzzzZZZ Wee dex..... your soo funny |
Voted For: String9487
Duke String took it with less lines...good world play...liked the closer..closer whhas hott...opener whas hott...decent battle...string'z whas short and sweet..Dex..yo opener i liked better but string got the better punches... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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ha ha ha. im getttin this vote DQd. wat a load of shit!! |
kordozar ur a fuckin mop wtf do u mean "street shit"? get the fuck outta here mayn.
uppin for votes |
Actually Dex ur a load of shit...and ya rhymez say it...
---D.Truth---- |
haha u aint never lie to that ^^^^^^^^ uppin for votes so i can get rid of this wack nigga
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