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Life aint shit
this place i see aint life this is a contorted vision//
im mor then wishin for life to end so i can abort this mission// money swirlin, girls r watchin dyin aint even a choice// high off of death smoking ignorance is the only way i rejoice// is it death my crooked line coverin my pupils in hate// or livin strate followin jesus christ headin for pearly gates// the brink of oxegyn's extinction stayin focused is hard// dont hate my flesh because my bodys created by the rib of God// i sway and falll i pray and call for teh light to stay up tall// but grey is all i see and what i feel may not exist at all// a shot ringin from the opposite block murderous shots// i thought this was hell,this is life? no wonder i taste the smoke of murderous rocks// i had to be born, my heart had to pulsate eventually// swallowed by God's traps for the weak i murdered myself intentionally// daughter 2months coming, my brothers' got a thirst for my blood// under the storm but i feel the heat, the spray is hailing above// doctors aint shit to me just smart people who create long death// all i got is my heart but now its gone so now i speak wrong breaths// why did i have to come i thouht shit was cool, this niggas a star// wrong this niggas got a child wit no other shit but his heart// the women fucked, money fucked me again// i wanna say i fucked the bible, but the bible wasnt a close friend// peace to the murderers, peace, to all the times i was screwed// rest in peice to me cause i aint got shit everything i speak is old news// holla at this kid, 1luv. |
tight peace no doubt
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really strong images in this:
the brink of oxegyn's extinction stayin focused is hard// dont hate my flesh because my bodys created by the rib of God// originality as well, a few more multis wouldve been cool but this piece was tight like the cat above me said. got to keep posting. pzz. |
thank you, elevatin
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please dont sleep yall, 1luv.
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nice peace flowed well gud use of wordplay holla @ a collab im in
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=16099 |
good look, elevatin, could i get some feedback??/?, 1luv.
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tight shit man my favorite part was
women fucked, money fucked me again// i wanna say i fucked the bible, but the bible wasnt a close friend// keep it up holla at me for a collab sometime lalacrazy876@aol.com ~1` |
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