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Beretta 12-29-04 11:08 PM

fuck a title
 
kill you quicker than the solotude of some aids/
left body decomposed all original features have changed/
you'll have a closed coffin when the funeral is arranged/
stainless leave you brain-less im shameless/
stand over you with stained-fists/
after exchanged-hits has your name-clicked to my main-list/
take-this bitch you gettin the backword-christ/
attack-herbs-nice then put you in my last-worse-life/
filled with: blood, guts, terrorism, death everything tragic/
devils magic you just added to the static/
tagged faggat made your life ragged i know cause iv had-it/
plus iv had it with the wallerin of you facial expressions/
till you look at your face when it has my fist impression/
feel the pain while you lay in your grave...
i quit diggin so its an inclined plane/
whipped together a cardbourd tombstone with your name/
read rest in peices and... oh shit the rest got erased/ in the pourin rain____

Ysdat 12-29-04 11:11 PM

multi's, I like this because of your use a multi's. seem's like a key to me,blah. good drop 8/10.
remember your link's.

Beretta 12-29-04 11:15 PM

^^^^ right on dog


remember my links?-- whats that mean

Ysdat 12-29-04 11:18 PM

leave decent feed on two other open mic's then post your link's.

link's=url

The reason for this is to create feed,feed wil help other's elevate.

Beretta 12-30-04 02:29 PM

uppin mothafuckas

The Militant 12-30-04 02:33 PM

I Liked It..u Used A Lot Of Multis Ya Rhymin Was Good..with A Nice Flow...the End Was Kinda Weak But It Was Still Preety Good...8/10
Leave Feed On Mine...
Peace...

Beretta 12-30-04 03:38 PM

^^^^ yeah i wanted to hurry up and end it so i just threw some retty siplistic shit to end it

right on for the feed back


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