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YoungSoulja 12-30-04 09:55 AM

My Block:first verse
 
fast paced,heart race,da army we run dis place
fuck em up,tie em up,leave em bleedin from dae face
pushin rocks,makin stocks,better run here come da cops
talkin shit bust yo lip wats up nigga we bout to box
poppin nines,fuckin dimes,hands on deck its our time
gettin cheese,gettin greesed,perfect night fo da crime
runnin back,countin stacks,almost done got one mo pack
to da bank,highest ranked,neva stopped mah pockets phat
rhymin hard,stay bizzare,up late writin bars
notebook,neva shooked,gone be famous buyin cars
keep it real,pay da bill,crazy niggas poppin pills
headache,haven't ate,im hungry fo da kill
so hot on da block,why you mad? cuz you're not
lookin fly,you gettin high,dese aint nike dae REEBOK
feel da pain,always trained,got tricks like david blaine
get a glock,keep it cocked,you better do so for yo sake

wat yall think hahn

Ysdat 12-30-04 10:08 AM

ok drop, rhyme's are good flow is good.
overall 6/10
keep dropping, remember your link's.
repay the feed, link in sig.

YoungSoulja 12-30-04 10:28 AM

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can i please get some feed

YoungSoulja 01-02-05 01:32 AM

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