|
street~shorty vs ache
Battle Rules:
6 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-30-04 at 05:25 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
street~shorty has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-30-04 04:56 PM.
|
ache has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-30-04 04:56 PM.
|
man u think ur a emcee but thats a mistake
imma take him out he needs to take a break he has no change ill take him down in one shot his rhymes so cold they s boldnever got sold he this hes "game" but he just lame thinks hes "fame" u sud be let down in shame i claim u sud put ur head in shame little rusty not battled in a while |
hurry up
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
Street~Shorty:
assuming your a girl... i accepted with ten recomended, but she incisted six. she wont give what i want, i dont usually Go Fish from tricks. guess i'll drop an easy three bars & let the voting commense. having came back from retirement with that rec, no wonder ya tense. i just began to open up & realized thats is, its done. this battle was less pursued than fashion hit n run. |
u wun i came wack im to rusty......................
|
uppin....fo' my 1st lose...........................................
|
Voted For: ache
ACHE LOL GOOD OPENER HERE ENDER WAS AIGHT DECENT PUNCHES HERE GOOD FLOW AND STRUCTURE NICE VOCAB A 6/10 STREET SHORTY NO GOOD PUNCHES OR DISSES FLOW AND STRUCTURE WAS OFF AS WELL AND ALL THAT HURT YOU AND MADE YOU LOSE A 2/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^unexplained my stuck was better than his^^
removed |
upiin............................................. ......
|
u.p.p.i.n
. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . |
u.p..i.n.
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . |
Voted For: ache
You Got My Vote.. More Complex And Had Better Flow.. Street Shorty.. Try Fitting Punches And Personals INto Your Verse.. Decent Job By Both But.. Ache Got This One.. Please Return The Vote With A Vote To A Battle In My Sig.. ThANKS !!! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
| All times are GMT -4. The time now is 10:26 PM. |