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i create quakes just watch this Place-Shift
pick ya up by ya nose so you can get a Face-Lift
just Face-It, ill leave you fucking wasted
creating pain, hit ya with luggage just to Incase-It
my crews like the taliban cause they bring Mass-Terror
and leaving ya eyes black and blue like maskera
you think you can beat me? you Silly-Hoe but Really-Though..
you bitches are more fake than silicone
i cook more cats than asian chefs
punches to your ear, make ya go deaf
im tight on the mic, just say i have rigamortis
and i plow down everything in my path like clinton portis
if you want a victory against me you better neel and Pray-For-It
you want a freestyle, i make you Pay-For-It

uppin for some fucking feedback for once.

dis was tight 2 mayne.......yo pm me back bout dat offer dawg

thanks but can you all please explain for feed a little better? thanks.

You Got To Understand Most People Here Are Garbage.Theyre Just Intersted In Getting Peeps In A Crew.


OK Verse.Vocab Was Good, No Overused And Thats Always A Plus.Punches Werent That Hard And Alot Simple But They Got The Point Across.I'd Give It A 3/5 Which Is Better Than99.9% Of These Pricks On Here.

^lol.

uppin for more feedback on this.

^lol.

uppin for more feedback on this shit and please explain your feed a little better.

this is ok, some allright multi's in it. good flow.
remember your link's.
return the feed,check the sig.

return the feed? what 3 lines?? fuck that.

uppin for explained feedback

i create quakes just watch this Place-Shift
pick ya up by ya nose so you can get a Face-Lift
^^

allright multi's, bar's a good length.

just Face-It, ill leave you fucking wasted
creating pain, hit ya with luggage just to Incase-It
^^^
another nice multi, again a good bar length

my crews like the taliban cause they bring Mass-Terror
and leaving ya eyes black and blue like maskera
^^^
good attempt at a multi,ok similie's

you think you can beat me? you Silly-Hoe but Really-Though..
you bitches are more fake than silicone

^^
ok bar, good multi, first line a bit stretched though.

i cook more cats than asian chefs
punches to your ear, make ya go deaf

^line's a bit wak, just the cooking cat's part I wasnt really feeling.

im tight on the mic, just say i have rigamortis
and i plow down everything in my path like clinton portis
^^^
ok bar

if you want a victory against me you better neel and Pray-For-It
you want a freestyle, i make you Pay-For-It
^^medium closer,could of come a bit stronger with it.
overall-
flow-8/10
rhyme's-7/10
structure-6/10
......
return the feed.