insomnia
 

Cant sleep, cant dream, stair in the corner
cant weep, cant steam, fair dreams sorrow
a sickness of self i cant over come, lying awake all night while most are snug
a thickness of wealth i cant bum, shaking a pillow in the night like it was a rug
cant count sheep, cant even creep, sandman hasnt brought me to the beach
cant mount feet, cant catch winks, afgan covers eyes darkness wont breach
been awake could be the rum, no pain no reason to shun, give da sheets a tug
watchin shadows on the run, no wain no tension to gun, give da kid the bug
cant reap the sleep, cant catch the zee, cant just roll over
cant peep a week, cant patch the greef, cant just fall slumber
laying wake till i see the sunrise, rollin back but never closing eyes
days months years cycle likewise, drugs only way cornia restin lyes
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yo im new to this tell me what ya think
 

exactly what it says see im workin on all aspects of my game and trying all the different styles the site has to offer...drop what ya think ill up this............... :spit: :spit:

yo this was a nice drop fam. work on your flow and vocabulary. 9/10. keep working at it and you will get better.