FreeStyle [ mad vocab ]
 

destracting the mind, these deceptive rhymes .. got niggas seein triple vision, double times .. *sick is tha best* you are correct .. you can lay me 6 deep, i will ressurect .. Born Legacies, a few of the Select .. you want in, get ya rhymes checked .. my affect, is that of wich Collects .. lyrical knowledge .. full scholarship to a lyrical college .. Born Lega-cy Univer-sity .. Complex-ity complicatin ya rhyme scheme .. i am the American Dream .. its that killa from tha Bean .. im right in ya sites, but i remain Unseen .. Invis-ible, Invinc-ible .. take you to school, im tha Principal .. subliminal messages in ya head .. ima Criminal turn ya back now ya dead .. haters hate, and lovers show love .. one way or tha other, i remain Thug .. Aces of Clubs .. trump card of tha game .. get ridda me? no, i shall remain

i know its half-ass, but gimme some feedback ya'll -- Bad or Good

show some love for ya Boyy . . . .
Tha Sickness - Born Legacy Crew

ya structure is kinda off...man but overall....everything was basic.....even the voab....cool shyt tho...i mean i caught a flow.....but its easier for ME....to read like this

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just my opinion.......umm freestyles are cool...but try selectin some topics man....umm u can look at my piece called final review.....its here in open mic....look around the top or middle....keep at it....if u need a link holla
i can help u elevate as well

d.a.

thanks playboy, keep tha feedback comin peoplez
you show love to me, ill def. return tha fava