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godfather vs top spit
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-31-04 at 03:14 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
godfather has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-31-04 02:45 AM.
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top spit has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-31-04 02:48 AM.
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This is my 1st battle, n my 1st rival, befo battlin me this bitch opened the bible, prayed to god n said his recital, god o god let me win, bitch battlin top spit is ur sin, if one of ur options is to forfeit than u might as well, father spit against me then u goin to hell, step up to me u already fell, ur lines be cheaper than the big value meal in taco bell, u cant win no matta how much u cuss, they call u a old father cuz when he bust his lines are like old rust, u must, be on the blunt, u fucken runt, ur mouth better shut, I’m takin a big old cut, he challenged me then he front, he ain a man father no he a cunt, u challenging the boss, nothing could save u now, not even the cross, this lyrical greatness in a 15 minute response, bitch IM gold this guy be bronze, call me renaissance, IM the rebirth of the best, put u in sleeping rest, shooting lyrical bullets right in ur chest, this guy a wannabe 1 god, IM several devils, u feelin my heat, take a seat, make u bleed, this guy soft so the only beef he got is only meet, u starin in the eyes, into a anti god in disguise, this guy starts to rise actin like resurrection of Jesus Christ, just fo me to hear the cries, but unlike the lord this guy will die, fly to angels right up above, just to get shoved, by the lord that he loved, god father, don’t bother, I slaughter, make u my daughter, take a lyrical stab, make u mad, n sad, u ain nobody’s dad, u a piece of crap, that raps, nonsense can u grasp, u all u do is blab n blab, cuz I carry very scary lyrics that r poison to god father like poison berries, cuz the only women this guy will get to be with is a pic of a virgin Mary, you all are seein n believen if this guy is a god I’m beaten him like a rage full demon, so my advice to u is that u should to start to pray, just go don’t u stay, I’m going straight through u like a sharp long ray, u better keep at bay, or u may, not have to wait, no longer cuz if u battle me then it’s already ur judgement day
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im a newbee to this game,u see me ur sure to be labled as lame,
but u an me aint tha same im in a different class, u dont wanna see my tekt nine blast, imma unload clips at your future kids, make sure no fucker lives, ''a true soilder'' u dont know what one is, an i know where ur work is,cleanin toilets while people takin a piss, now imma reject all these mc's like ''silent-seekers on a detour'' tryna underate me, well u better be sure G,coz i aint no newbee, aint no wannabee so ya better just trust me, or ul be history like bruce lee, but this is like tha 4th time of tryna be a keystyle mc, ya get me? ya better be fuckin right, coz your pockets are lookin pritty tight, to lyrically fit, coz its my time to shine , its my spot-light, |
im a newbee to this game,u see me ur sure to be labled as lame,
but u an me aint tha same im in a different class, u dont wanna see my tekt nine blast, imma unload clips at your future kids, make sure no fucker lives, ''a true soilder'' u dont know what one is, an i know where ur work is,cleanin toilets while people takin a piss, now imma reject all these mc's like ''silent-seekers on a detour'' tryna underate me, well u better be sure G,coz i aint no newbee, aint no wannabee so ya better just trust me, or ul be history like bruce lee, but this is like tha 4th time of tryna be a keystyle mc, ya get me? ya better be fuckin right, coz your pockets are lookin pritty tight, to lyrically fit, coz its my time to shine , its my spot-light, |
Voted For: top spit
nice battle flow- spit multies-none really punches-spit overall-spit ok battle, both verses were ok, not great |
Voted For: godfather
ayo I see vote for godfather cuz he had a way better structure and not only that I think he came harder wit da punches...ayo man topspit u gotta write wit bars man cuz ur rap was like a long story u feel me... and u had some good lines in their but I just couldn't flow wit it... so I vote:godfather harder punches better structure |
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This was feedback posted for top spit
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Voted For: top spit
iight i think top got diz battle his verse wuz more creative an hit harder i lyked da closer 2 it killed him off godfather u had 3 lines wut iz dat all about? try using 4 lines ta make it 2 bars but ya flow wuz iight, u juss need some elevation but dont we all?? no hate yall an return da fave in my battle with ILLMATIC peace out |
Voted For: godfather
ight diz was an one-sided battle: opener: godfather structure: godfather vocab: godfather punches: both personals: both multis: godfather closer: godfather da reason y godfather wins my vote is b'cuz he got betta structure of his rhymes; he spit it on a professional level, & topspit ur good also but u need 2 structure ur rhymes betta & elevate in ur rhymes more |
This was feedback posted for godfather
checkin deese pollz...............................
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Voted For: godfather
gf got this his personals were better his flow hit harder punches were nice everything was jus a step better than the other dude but either way good shit both of ya jus go get ur shit critiqued it will help alot good shit vote= gf |
thanks alot for
tha feedback i really apretiate it |
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