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Black Queen 12-31-04 12:15 PM

Lil D vs Black Queen
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 is a KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-01-05 at 12:15 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

System 12-31-04 12:16 PM

Lil D has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-31-04 12:16 PM.

System 12-31-04 12:16 PM

Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-31-04 12:16 PM.

Lil D 12-31-04 12:35 PM

are you serious? i guess that was supposed to affect me//but you gone
have to come betta than that,b//okay. i guess u tryin` to hear my flow,
right?// i`m gonna go soft, cuz u obviously don`t know, right?//u a
fake nigga, you should take ya wack rhymes back to elementary//if bein’
hot was against the law, I’d be under the penitentiary//man, beyonce`s
jeans are tight, but you a loose fit//u need to think of somethin better
to come wit//if i were a genie, i`d grant u 3 wishes//and one would be
to make your dick longer than three inches// your diggin ya self into a
hole you can`t get out of//you not hearin` me, dog, so i`ll say it a
little bit louder//you couldn`t touch me if u had a ten foot pole// and i can
jus see you lookin` dumb, standin` outside my sold-out shows//your so
wack, my little brother could make you cry//now imagine what i could do
to you if i actually tried...//how much longer are you gonna try to
prove yourself to the world?//face the facts,b, you can`t touch this
A Town squirrel //ya vocabulary is so damn diminutive, u should come
harder, cuz//now go ahead and get a dictionary and tell me how phi dat
was//i`m out now, you`ve had enough for the day//but B4 you come at me
wit dat bullshit, i suggest u watch what u say...

Black Queen 12-31-04 12:39 PM

D u really stupid u lose every battle one after the another
I've seen better lines on a overweight stretched bitch which is ur mother
Your stupid ass didn't noe that im sick, matafact i spark heat
While, you've bitten more bars then chocolate addicts with sharp teeth
U can never elevate and show me somthin hot plz understand
Coz you couldn't drop a good verse if a bible fell out of your hand
U've got no skill in ur spits, ur verse jus fills w/ bits, u copy whore
Ur unoriginal,coz like boxers with dejavu, i've seen those punches before
In this battle u get murdered son, a sick massacre if u never heard of one
Usin werds as guns,i'll have u prayin hard to ya priest, like nervous nuns
I'll smash and repeat and flash my guns w/ som heat, makin u catch a defeat
And have u runnin for life like u were born w/ a treadmill attached to ur feet
Ur scared of bein murdered, livin after-this, that shits at most a maybe
In dis battle i'll give u no chance to live, like the fate of aborted babies
Ur a disgrace to rap, shit drops better crap, ur piece got me laffin
Ur asking what happened w/ Jay Z retirement, well he heard u started rappin
im waiting dawg cuz you say you gonna drop but i gotta admit
you should change your name to asshole cuz all you drop is shit

Chuck Low 12-31-04 12:42 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

BLACK QUEEN GOT THIS CUZ SHE HIT HARD AND HAD GOOD WORDPLAY SO SHE GET MY VOTE IT WAS GOOD BATTLE THO.....RTF
CHUCK LOW VS. JAVELIN
CHUCK LOW VS. KKKHATER
CHUCK LOW VS. JBKRYPTONITE
CHUCKLOW VS.DEATH

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Black Queen 12-31-04 02:03 PM

uppin............................................. .

Black Queen 01-01-05 10:31 AM

man uppin..........................................

Khaos_daRenegade 01-01-05 02:37 PM

Voted For: Lil D

my vote goes for queen she had better punch line that really hit hard while lild line were played and not as hard she also killed lil d on the vocab and structure his was aight but hers was much better she also had him on the multi's using them to set her punches up nicely i didnt really understand d's verse it made no sense because half the shit was just fillers and the other half didnt rhyme but my vot is for queen

Vote switched

Khaos_daRenegade 01-01-05 02:38 PM

man wat the fuck wrong wit that shit i voted for black queen

Black Queen 01-01-05 02:39 PM

rofl you put it in da wrong thang so you voted fo lil d instead on me

Black Queen 01-02-05 02:19 PM

upin.............................................. .

hang-man 01-02-05 03:09 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

D u really stupid u lose every battle one after the another
I've seen better lines on a overweight stretched bitch which is ur mother
ok

Your stupid ass didn't noe that im sick, matafact i spark heat
While, you've bitten more bars then chocolate addicts with sharp teeth
ha good one

U can never elevate and show me somthin hot plz understand
Coz you couldn't drop a good verse if a bible fell out of your hand
decent

U've got no skill in ur spits, ur verse jus fills w/ bits, u copy whore
Ur unoriginal,coz like boxers with dejavu, i've seen those punches before
ha good again

In this battle u get murdered son, a sick massacre if u never heard of one
Usin werds as guns,i'll have u prayin hard to ya priest, like nervous nuns
good again danm

I'll smash and repeat and flash my guns w/ som heat, makin u catch a defeat
And have u runnin for life like u were born w/ a treadmill attached to ur feet
oo shit danm

Ur scared of bein murdered, livin after-this, that shits at most a maybe
In dis battle i'll give u no chance to live, like the fate of aborted babies
word thats hot

Ur a disgrace to rap, shit drops better crap, ur piece got me laffin
Ur asking what happened w/ Jay Z retirement, well he heard u started rappin
ok

im waiting dawg cuz you say you gonna drop but i gotta admit
you should change your name to asshole cuz all you drop is shit
decent ending

yo lil d ya strcture is all fucked up i cant follow ya flow and ya punches wasnt that hard hitting dawgs im sorry i aint like none of it but i can give u propd on the flow that was the best thing u had i've seen but try harder and i couldnt brake down ya verse so i just had to drop a comment about it

vote: BQ

50hater_killer 01-02-05 05:13 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

I felt the queen more on this one. Her structure was better, her flow was easy for me to follow. but hey gurl keep workin on ur multis iight they where ok and her opener- her closure was good and her hits where harder so overall queen gets this.

rtf in my links peace.


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