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LyLWuN 12-31-04 12:26 PM

LyLWuN vs Assas-Sin
 
Battle Rules:

5 Bars (10 Lines)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 25

Check in by: 12-31-04 at 12:56 PM

Must drop verse in 90 minutes after check in.

Old / expired battle close - win

System 12-31-04 12:27 PM

Assas-Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-31-04 12:27 PM.

System 12-31-04 12:27 PM

LyLWuN has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-31-04 12:27 PM.

Kyleon 12-31-04 12:48 PM

C'mon fam you serious approachin me with a losin STATS
Ill own you and shove my foot up ya like sum door mats
Lets be real da only time you steppin on da block
Is win ya little sister pushed over the lego box
Nigka please you sayin you a gangsta ya must be on crack
Onlytime you pakin an 9 is when ya took 3 out of da 12 pack
Why you frontin to be sumthin ya not homeboi
Im talkin bout bein a bitch cuz i saw you playin with ya momz vibratin toy
Ill merk ya fak ass nigGa,When I rearrange ya face when i let go dem triggaz
Beatin me?thats sum funny shit,Da only to you have have da top verse is when you FIRST spit.....

no need to explain dis verse..if you dont understand then dont vote..plain N simple

LyLWuN 12-31-04 01:31 PM


lookin 4 a win? nope....u still on a scopin route, more like u lost trynna focus out,
but i'm sorry 'G' seems u destroyed just like ya CLIQUE(click), and ya BROKEN MOUSE//
is ya rep protected? imma 'throw u in a pit of fire' and leave u contrasted then,
like i 'possessed a halo,' i'll bring u 'back' 2 'exposed flame' and show ya ASS-AS-SIN//
u must got ya 'brains in ya hands'.....HOLD THAT THOUGHT; have u noticed ya weak-quotes?,
guess not after all i'm leavein u 'Open 2 Criticism' just like all of your Free-Posts//
u like 'blind contestants,' how can u see a win? damn u not-hard-lame,
and then a international gangsta? not since ROCK-STAR-GAMES//
and as far as skill? 'U' and 'I' ain't close enough logically to stoppin me,
cuz by me 'DROPPIN A G' u'd think i meant 'shoppin sprees//

Darth Assassin 12-31-04 04:08 PM

Voted For: LyLWuN


lookin 4 a win? nope....u still on a scopin route, more like u lost trynna focus out,
but i'm sorry 'G' seems u destroyed just like ya CLIQUE(click), and ya BROKEN MOUSE//
(lol cool opener, wordplay points)
is ya rep protected? imma 'throw u in a pit of fire' and leave u contrasted then,
like i 'possessed a halo,' i'll bring u 'back' 2 'exposed flame' and show ya ASS-AS-SIN//
(k...)
u must got ya 'brains in ya hands'.....HOLD THAT THOUGHT; have u noticed ya weak-quotes?,
guess not after all i'm leavein u 'Open 2 Criticism' just like all of your Free-Posts//
(ooo nasty....and 1st line was illness...wordplay points)
u like 'blind contestants,' how can u see a win? damn u not-hard-lame,
and then a international gangsta? not since ROCK-STAR-GAMES//
(k)
and as far as skill? 'U' and 'I' ain't close enough logically to stoppin me,
cuz by me 'DROPPIN A G' u'd think i meant 'shoppin sprees//
(k....ok ender)

sum- ya wordplay was on point in a lot of places...daamn..very very clever...and ur flow has improved...personals were seen in there as well.....had a few multis...cool shyt....

C'mon fam you serious approachin me with a losin STATS
Ill own you and shove my foot up ya like sum door mats
(eh...weak opener...generic punch)
Lets be real da only time you steppin on da block
Is win ya little sister pushed over the lego box
(eh...same as above)
Nigka please you sayin you a gangsta ya must be on crack
Onlytime you pakin an 9 is when ya took 3 out of da 12 pack
(nah)
Why you frontin to be sumthin ya not homeboi
Im talkin bout bein a bitch cuz i saw you playin with ya momz vibratin toy
(ok....)
Ill merk ya fak ass nigGa,When I rearrange ya face when i let go dem triggaz
Beatin me?thats sum funny shit,Da only to you have have da top verse is when you FIRST spit.....
(umm weak ender and wheres the endin rhyme?)

sum- ok from all that talk u did in my welcome post...i expected a whole lot more than this....all this was below basic stuff...wft is this?? this is text not audio...come with some clever lines man....wordplay enhances that for one....and secondly...shes a chic u couldve came with some more personals.....ur flow was off in the end.....ur punches were pretty weak....and ur personals were eh...ok....no multis.....i dont know, it seems to me u lacked some killer instinct

anyway ...another breakdown just in case this site is blind and loves cryin over votes

multis - lylwun...not many but some
personals - lulwun.....had the edge
punches - lylwun ....by lightyears
wordplay - lylwun...by lightyears
flow - lylwun....slighty off but took it compared to assasin

like i said.....lylwun took this...it was one sided....this is probably gonna be the most detailed vote.....

v=lylwun

d.a.

Kyleon 12-31-04 04:19 PM

hate vote comin from you since we all merk ya ass in da open act corna...and the endin to my verse is a multis so what da fuck you talkin bout fam...next time you vote make sure you know what da fuck you're sayin...vote dq...ill make sure of it...

Darth Assassin 01-01-05 03:07 PM

what do u mean.....u know what....the MOST DETAILED VOTE....and ur gonna dq that shyt.....lmao.....omg....u must be afraid of losin.....i explained every line let alone i did it in catagories...even if u had multis....u still lost due to the punches and personals....which u lacked....lmao....and merked me??? when??.....all u said was some garbage for one....and two....that wasnt a battle......in a welcoming thread??...pssh...define merked u illerate nigga...lmao

anyway......like i said lylwun....the voting here is just unsanitary.....this dude cant even accept a loss when its comin........proves hes bitchmade and scared......and if im wrong.....then he wont reply with some macho man front....and just accept the vote.........like A MAN!!!

and not a lil bitch...

pssh...herbs.....and he calls a detailed vote a hate vote......goodluck on achieving illness...lmao

d.a.

LyLWuN 01-03-05 03:24 PM

L0L Right In My Last Battle Here, I Had A Whole Lot Of Hate Votes.....Trust That Battle Was Nothin But Cockslidin So I Didn't Care.....I Knew That Battle Was A Guilt Win.....That Nigga Knew He Lost.....But Its All Good I Ain't Complain.....So Assassin, Calm Ya Nerves Kid And Lose The Attitude.....
eZ
Uppin.....


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