An Addicts Chronicle
 

a product of success at times went thru stress
couldnt take it started smokin, went in2 cardiac arrest
this was at a young age, he recoverd n grew up
got his self offa crack, got a job n blew up
became a succesfull businessman n got rich
made his family every way he could, but dat bitch
pressured him so much that he had a relapse
was eitha gonna kill his self or go back 2 crack
they got a divorce cuz they lives was off course
n he was gettin played like a fuckin golf course
he kept his son,and his ex had no remourse
for leavin his life, wouldn't see him without force
kept on smokin crack n got layed off his job
when 9/11 came around n made americans sob
got back on his feet, bout a year or so later
met a bitch that did crack 2 n started 2 date her
one night he was leavin work, had picked up his son
went 2 buy some rocks but all he had was one's
didn't wanna quit smokin, cuz dat shit aint fun
so he thought he could steal it, n smoke on tha run
so he got tha coke but didn't give up no funds
tha dealer pulled out his gun, shot him in front of his son
i know its fucked up 2 write some shit that i write
but i seen in my life, people die 4 that white
that angel dust, weed, even heroine 2
keep ya mind off dat shit no matta wut u do
its killin 2 many, addiction's a bitch
u see how he's dead, but he started off rich
u'd neva expect it 2 happen 2 niggaz like dat
but smoke it 1 time, n u'll be runnin back
doin wuteva it takes 2 get a hit
dyin 4 da shit right in front of ya kid

can i get some fuckin feed?

this was pretty good....the structure was nice and the storytelling....you maybe could have came more complex.....but overall 8/10 keep doing it