Lyrically gifted
 

~Introduction~

I had to write this because its what i do
I write whats on my mind,an this has nothing to
do with any one here,theres a dick riding site im
speaking on in so many words,,but i didnt get to deep in to it
They just dont give me credit for shit,
an there cheating me out of my battles as well.
Follow me on the journey of verbal release


Mic check mic check 1-2-1-2

~Verse~

Listen, if you're as real as you say,then you can feel this"im still ill with it"!
I dont mind emotions an feelings like cards im gone deal with it "killing a bitch!"
Collecting riches, pocket picking an laying bodies in dirt "like pipes in ditches"!
Giving them stitches "fuck granting you wishes 'your lamp king is missing"!
5 spits a thousand words like a picture without whispers "this is my poetic mission."
I know you listening so homme you know I aint tripping the cypher section is my kitchen"!
I been running this shit since way back when" turn back pages an look for my inscriptions."
So stop skipping an look for the best that ever did it God is my witness the hell with liquor"
Not when im taking prescriptions im looking for healing like Jesus giving a blind man vision"
No need for alcohol or hate from yall I just want you to hear this so somebody can feel me."
2005 a brand new beginning"take down the old an put up newer buildings dream previsions."

I seen it coming but refused to listen"I understand now"I aint got friends on this site."
So yall gone play me out,what happen to love on Christmas an singing silent night?
Get it together you fronting,but want fight to save your life "so what's wrong with being nice."
Its unquestionable I got the best flow on this site im here to let you know "so just let it go"
You fucking with a pro im connecting the dots like dicks in hoe's "snapping hinges in doe's."
Meaning doors so your punk asses will know stop acting so slow "5MIC is carrying the flow"
I battled 4 people at once an 3 was a no show the 4th was to slow they even let D riders V"!
D stands for Dick V stands for Vote you get it like cigarette smoke like 2 hands can choke"
I gave the the nigga that got DQ'ed a second chance an he still didn't show "what a pro" {lol}
How the fuck are you throwing elbows?" just let me know are you friend or foe"!

Because the battles just beginning, im looking for warriors not mc's who cant finish shit"!
The truth is all I spit an im sick an tired of your crews riding dicks "turning tricks"!
Like a magician on crack looking for a fix "now aint that a bitch you sweeter then lickerish"
Man im sick of all this shit, everybody trying to diss writing trashy scripts "looking for tips"
When feed back is phony" if only you knew how I felt homme "so back up off me"!
No, you don't want to cross me im killing you softly with one speed "so don't talk beef"!'
If you cant really handle the truth i spit deeper then roots an ready to murder your troops"
Fuck pictures when im living proof you niggas is fruits easily picked you aint got no juice"!
But you fronting like you do thats why I still feel I owe you dropping a flow on your soldiers"
Just to show you how I role up like secrets in folders or foul noises in motors that blows up"
This is explosive" the word play is so good, like money in old hoods "so just smoke wood"!

An relax cause this want take long I only drop hot joints "like thugs who got warrants"!
But none of yall got one an your flows want popcorn you short an you're not growing"!
You been left an you're not going Grey Hound so stop flowing an keep all your broke coins"!
Cause you don't really want war" God is good, but I don't mind putting some bodies in floors
Killing for one cause,Lord forgive me for these thoughts im fighting the devil off "daum im lost
A lot of things happen im hot like wires crossed an my gun keep clapping without happiness
My continence is filled with sadness taking over the madness"to recapture the laughter."
Looking for factors,what happen to rapers"we over reacting fighting for rations over chapters"
I pray every night to get close to the master God bless Reggie White his soul is ever lasting
No more pain nore sorrow the body is borrowed its only a vessel for God plans tomorrow."
So I hope you follow, im tipping my bottle "looking for followers "when God call on us."

~outro~

Can we have a moment of silence for Reggie White.............................
.................................................. ...............................................
In Jesus name amen,
lets all keep his family in our prayers,,
because there going through some thing
An we know God has Reggie White in his camp now,,1

Links i gave feed back too


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169414

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168776

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169227

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169400

very very very long........ur flow was kinda hard for me to grasp but its cool.....some of ur wordplay was on point here and some aint.....i saw one of ur battles that ur talkin about.....u got some skill in ya....

try www.rapworld.com

we have a voters league there to make sure that votes dont get swayed......just a recommendation

u got some cool ish here...read it as a freestyle....not too great but it wasnt weak at all either

peep my final review...see what type of shyt im on...im a fan of wordplay as well

ps...cats here will sleep on an mc...so be prepared....

d.a.

thas heat right there
I was fellin that Great flow, u had nice wordplay in there,
good job

Thanks you have to read it strait through on each line
pause a second an then read the next line strait through
and it will come across, trust me i write like this all the time
thanks for the feed,,an Happy new years to you all,,

yep yep i read it how u said, it gotta be one of the best drops ive seen in a while.
flowed awsome, structure was well and great word play..
not much to critic but it was hot
9.8/10

Thanks for the feed,im only trying to get better,,
Happy new years to you all,,2005 yea!

check out my drop if u can

aight homme,,,daum all these other post up,
an minds wa up first where the feed back,before yall posted?
daum this site aint changed a bit,,an im only dropping through

daum this bull shit,,,why no feed back,,i know im not wack

this is bull shit,,but i'll wait an see who will give

Any day now feed back will come around

im out of here,,this sucks

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:cussing: daumit wheres every one at around here!
no feed will be given until i get it :nono: