no feedback is a muthafucka
 

ya'll rap like u on crack but when i rap i get no feedback, trust me u don't

want me to attack and jack u right against the back, skills is what u lack, u

don't even drive a cadillac, there's no time to go off track, i have to keep it

clear for the queer that's checkin this shit right here, u know i fill u with fear

cuz i hate guys that take it up the rear, now u watchin your back trust me

you'll know when i'm near i cause more than one tear, i'll fuck u up so much

that u won't reconize yourself in a mirror, i'll beat u in public and i'll rap til

u learn to love it, my shit well get you to throw a fit that won't quit, i

smoke that shit til i'm so high that my mouth turns dry and i might not be

the best but i try, i do enough to get by, and if u don't like it then you'll

get your head blown off for being a show off, cuz i don't know what else

to do with this rage besides pullin out the guage and dumpin a shell on

another person wantin to go to hell that's y if this was a cd it'll sell more

than a mill because it'll have as much skill as i put into when i kill

let's get some feedback for christ sake i know ya'll atleast reading just tell me what's good about it or what i have to fix up and let's get it straight i ain't
talkin bout the person that's reading this even though it says that in my rap
i just made it into a battle like rap just because it sounds better

yo I'm diggin tha helll out of tha drop..............I love ur verbal usage.......................An its nice ta see somebody who appreciates feedbac.............
Keep write good shit like dat an good things will happen

:thumbup: thanx unknown i love to hear feedback and what's any better than good feedback i noticed your shit ain't that bad neither