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Gangsta Nation-Peep dis Shit
this Just A Lil Somein I Did
hook Im From The Place Were Gangstas Lay Gangsts Play Gangstas Die And Gangstas Spray verse 1 Ak-47,clip In Ya Skull/ Reload It, Then Put It Up Ya Nose/ Gangsta Mode, Shove It Down/ Aim At Ya Mouth, Cockin The 6 Pound/ Niggas Talk That Bullshit And Get Shot Up/ Glock On The Waist Not Givin A Fuck/ They Claim Westcoast, Lets Do It Nigga/ My Day Consist Of Throwin Up Signs And Pullin Triggas/ Bang 'em, They Cant Do What I Do/ Im From Da Land Were They Glory Red And Blue/ Shoot These Faggots, Who Can See Me/ Doubt Me And Get Shot In Rite In Da Beenie/ Thats It, Jus A Lil Sometin |
Pretty good shit...woulda liked to see this extended a lil longer but this was pretty nice man...way to rep that west side...hit up the links in my sig and return the fav...flow was on point, and this was basically some hot westcoast heat...good shit...1
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damn this is the best shit ive ever heard from ya mayne, im realln feeln dis, especialy da chorus!
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werd, thanx fro da feed
ima do this in audio, so uppin dis yall |
it was ok...it was too short to give a descent evaluation on but...there wasnt any vocab, the hook was ok, would be pretty good if it was longer and on audio...seems like a good gangsta mainstream song
my advice just up your vocab,get more detailed, and shit like that...personally its not my style to talk about shit like that but whatever do ya thang peace |
yea, its a westcoast thing mayn, we dont really use "Vocab" but thanx i feel wat u sayin
uppin |
yeah it do seem pretty mainstream, its aight....
you couldve maybe made you rhymes more complex, throw some better vocab or some multis in there, that would make it real nice... good looks on reppin da west, dats whassup..... nice open mic... |
Yo you got a hot flow going for your self,,
i wished it was longer, but what you do have still dope comming from you very creative,an gangster 1 |
thanx homie, uppin dis yall, be on da lookout for da audio of this
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fo text this really aint nothin special but i think you wrote this as an audio and its sounds like it would be pretty good.........chorus sounds good.......u know i aint really all in with tha gun-play shit......but from what i could tell it seemed prettty good........overall for a quick lil piece this was good
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it was iight....just work on ya vocab....some of the stuff there was played like crazy.....pzz ~1~
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