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anxiety vs Phantom
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Due 2 Hours after check in... No crew votes... 500 Posts to vote... Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 01-01-05 at 03:07 AM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 02:56 AM.
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anxiety has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 02:59 AM.
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You stupid dunny, I mean look, why do I gotta son you again?
And it don't mean you gotta plasma screen cuz you use the new skin And you aint a pimp son, look, we all know that you're lying You could spit game everywhere and still not have a broad-in your horizons I crazy with the punches, so anxiety shut up and listen here I'll drop ya punk ass quicker than the glass ball on New Years Anxiety is a wigger and I coulda sworn that I had said this before But the only he ghetto......is when it comes to votes on the polls So if you ever come to my hood, and start looking like a dork We'll pop ya bitch ass quicker........than champagne corks W00t i'm in the New Years spirit :) Good luck homie. |
Kids only half me... So every time i try to see him i gotta double back.
Only time he pops up in convos... Is when he's jumpin on bubble wrap... Phantom aka Socrates already lost, somebody please take him away... And i wonder how you seem to be so experienced... ..............................................At faking your gay... You offered to show kids how to throw punches, and improve at text... But I think you misunderstood, were actually trying to gain respect... It's true when it comes between me and you, most people think ur better... But thats just because every time you lose, you re-set your record... Think your so dope, brag about your punches, structure and wordplay... But your officially the worst emcee of the year... ................................................An d it's only the first day... |
Word goodluck to you too...............................
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Voted For: anxiety
Vote: anx Phantom: decent structure, some ok bars, but it just wasnt as good a drop as anxieties..There wernt much wrong with ur verse, just more creative hard-hittin punches. Anxiety: Kids only half me... So every time i try to see him i gotta double back. Only time he pops up in convos... Is when he's jumpin on bubble wrap... nice opener, not original, but still good - 7/10 Phantom aka Socrates already lost, somebody please take him away... And i wonder how you seem to be so experienced... ..............................................At faking your gay... meh gay stuff........ok as a filler in ur drop - 6.5/10 You offered to show kids how to throw punches, and improve at text... But I think you misunderstood, were actually trying to gain respect... nice punch, well set-up aswell, gd bar - 8/10 It's true when it comes between me and you, most people think ur better... But thats just because every time you lose, you re-set your record... ok, nuttin special - 6.5/10 Think your so dope, brag about your punches, structure and wordplay... But your officially the worst emcee of the year... ................................................An d it's only the first day... nice closer, original aswell, well set-up, gd flow -8.5/10 RTF - links in sig |
This was feedback posted for anxiety
checkin the polls here......................
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This was feedback posted for anxiety
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48 Views Huh?
Well then vote you fuckers........................................... .................. |
Lazy ass muthafuckaz..............................
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Voted For: Phantom
Aiight to be honest soc even though text is wack, you are pretty good at it.. This was a good battle, I'll start with anxiety. Bro your verse was better than a lot of kids on this site I'll give you that, but some of the punches didnt hit as well as they should of, heres an example: Kids only half me... So every time i try to see him i gotta double back. Only time he pops up in convos... Is when he's jumpin on bubble wrap... That punch was a little weak for an opener, the multi was there, but it didnt really pay him out at all.. If someone used that against me I'd be like... meh.. Your second line was a little better, but could of been worded better if you had of maybe givin reference to pop lotty and made a punch with that.. 3rd punch I actually had no idea what you were talking about, and it wasnt till your last 2 punches where I was like o word this is picking up.. But I think it was a case of too little too late.. Soc, I dont have much to say because your better than me at text I think.. But I actually enjoyed reading your punches which is something that doesent usually happen when I read text verses on this site.. I might start voting on your battles more often.. Good shit.. Peace all.. And sorry anxiety, I think you were out done here, but keep at it and keep reading verses like the one soc dropped cause thats the best way to elevate. |
It does suck when you lose a vote to someone who wasn't trying :banghead:
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Upping............................................
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This was feedback posted for Phantom
...................................close battle, checking the scores
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