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anxiety 01-01-05 02:37 AM

anxiety vs Phantom
 
10 Lines...
Due 2 Hours after check in...
No crew votes...
500 Posts to vote...

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 01-01-05 at 03:07 AM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

System 01-01-05 02:56 AM

Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 02:56 AM.

System 01-01-05 02:59 AM

anxiety has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 02:59 AM.

Phantom 01-01-05 03:19 AM

You stupid dunny, I mean look, why do I gotta son you again?
And it don't mean you gotta plasma screen cuz you use the new skin
And you aint a pimp son, look, we all know that you're lying
You could spit game everywhere and still not have a broad-in your horizons
I crazy with the punches, so anxiety shut up and listen here
I'll drop ya punk ass quicker than the glass ball on New Years
Anxiety is a wigger and I coulda sworn that I had said this before
But the only he ghetto......is when it comes to votes on the polls
So if you ever come to my hood, and start looking like a dork
We'll pop ya bitch ass quicker........than champagne corks

W00t i'm in the New Years spirit :)

Good luck homie.

anxiety 01-01-05 03:55 AM

Kids only half me... So every time i try to see him i gotta double back.
Only time he pops up in convos... Is when he's jumpin on bubble wrap...
Phantom aka Socrates already lost, somebody please take him away...
And i wonder how you seem to be so experienced...
..............................................At faking your gay...
You offered to show kids how to throw punches, and improve at text...
But I think you misunderstood, were actually trying to gain respect...
It's true when it comes between me and you, most people think ur better...
But thats just because every time you lose, you re-set your record...
Think your so dope, brag about your punches, structure and wordplay...
But your officially the worst emcee of the year...
................................................An d it's only the first day...

anxiety 01-01-05 03:57 AM

Word goodluck to you too...............................

Acuity 01-01-05 06:39 AM

Voted For: anxiety

Vote: anx

Phantom: decent structure, some ok bars, but it just wasnt as good a drop as anxieties..There wernt much wrong with ur verse, just more creative hard-hittin punches.

Anxiety:
Kids only half me... So every time i try to see him i gotta double back.
Only time he pops up in convos... Is when he's jumpin on bubble wrap...
nice opener, not original, but still good - 7/10
Phantom aka Socrates already lost, somebody please take him away...
And i wonder how you seem to be so experienced...
..............................................At faking your gay...
meh gay stuff........ok as a filler in ur drop - 6.5/10
You offered to show kids how to throw punches, and improve at text...
But I think you misunderstood, were actually trying to gain respect...
nice punch, well set-up aswell, gd bar - 8/10
It's true when it comes between me and you, most people think ur better...
But thats just because every time you lose, you re-set your record...
ok, nuttin special - 6.5/10
Think your so dope, brag about your punches, structure and wordplay...
But your officially the worst emcee of the year...
................................................An d it's only the first day...
nice closer, original aswell, well set-up, gd flow -8.5/10

RTF - links in sig

Premanition 01-01-05 10:44 AM

This was feedback posted for anxiety
 
checkin the polls here......................

pz

Logic The Goonie 01-01-05 05:01 PM

This was feedback posted for anxiety
 
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anxiety 01-01-05 05:02 PM

48 Views Huh?

Well then vote you fuckers........................................... ..................

anxiety 01-03-05 11:44 PM

Lazy ass muthafuckaz..............................

La Cosa Nostra 01-05-05 04:52 AM

Voted For: Phantom

Aiight to be honest soc even though text is wack, you are pretty good at it.. This was a good battle, I'll start with anxiety. Bro your verse was better than a lot of kids on this site I'll give you that, but some of the punches didnt hit as well as they should of, heres an example:
Kids only half me... So every time i try to see him i gotta double back.
Only time he pops up in convos... Is when he's jumpin on bubble wrap...


That punch was a little weak for an opener, the multi was there, but it didnt really pay him out at all.. If someone used that against me I'd be like... meh.. Your second line was a little better, but could of been worded better if you had of maybe givin reference to pop lotty and made a punch with that.. 3rd punch I actually had no idea what you were talking about, and it wasnt till your last 2 punches where I was like o word this is picking up.. But I think it was a case of too little too late..

Soc, I dont have much to say because your better than me at text I think.. But I actually enjoyed reading your punches which is something that doesent usually happen when I read text verses on this site.. I might start voting on your battles more often..

Good shit..
Peace all..
And sorry anxiety, I think you were out done here, but keep at it and keep reading verses like the one soc dropped cause thats the best way to elevate.

anxiety 01-05-05 10:28 AM

It does suck when you lose a vote to someone who wasn't trying :banghead:

anxiety 01-06-05 06:37 PM

Upping............................................

headgames 01-06-05 08:18 PM

This was feedback posted for Phantom
 
...................................close battle, checking the scores


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