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In this life of love and despair.. you still gotta have faith..
Cause God will help u live life without violence or hate... You will have a lifetime of happiness if you just believe..... Because as once stated.. if u ask you sha'll recieve.. Jesus Fighted for us... even as he was nailed to the cross. If you give in to hate.. then in life you've already lost.. God is our savior.. here to guide u on the right routes.. Although there are still believers.. that have their doubts.. Life has changed so much.. since jesus walked the earth.. Although i've commited sins.. i've been a believer since birth.. He has spoken thru my people.. and they helped change this life.. To people sick of living in violence.. peace is the answer forget strife. Everybody has made mistakes.. but God still forgives you and for this you should now see.... he fulfill's life through you as i gaze at the mountains and swim in the see i thank jesus christ... and now i realize. without u.. there would be no life.. Now think What You Want... This is Meant To Be A Lesson... To Take You Out of The Past.. And Let You Live In The Present... Zane Eury 1-1-05 |
yo this could be like some hardcaor gosphel record
this a nice semi-collab like you said lol sweat-suit.. I'm feelin how you much you potrayed ur feelign and emotion on this.. fix the font and you have a 8.9/10..you don't u got a lousy 8.8./10 and that'll make u feel bad peace GOOOOD drop |
i was feeling this too, Genecide.... i liked ur wording and ya flow........ nice flip to the other half of this.... ;) stay up u two on this semi collab, maybe y'all should put each other's links under y'all verses so people can understand it's half a collab.. :thumbup:
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uppppiiiiiiiing,,
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lol.................. i can't believe u really changed ur name to that....... lmao
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i told ya i would... i dont care about my name... its just a joke to me pretty much... uuppiinngg...
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uppin... BLOAH KEY SLAP....
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uppin.... feedback plz..
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uppin... COME ON GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK...
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nice poem, i liked the content and your flow, this was dope man...keep it up..1 :thumbup:
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Nice one...flow, vocab, wordplay, imagery, everything was there...it's a concept you don't see every day so it was good to read for a change, keep on dropping your stuff cuz it's damn good! 8.5/10
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