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final vs Nostradamus
Battle Rules:
Roughly 30-40 Lines. Same crew, so crew votes are allowed. No Recycling. No Biting. No Dickriding. No shit writing. Word. Topic = "Games" G'Luck. :) Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 01-04-05 at 10:39 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
final has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-02-05 01:20 AM.
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Nostradamus has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-02-05 01:33 AM.
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i know you got this easily...i couldnt figure out nothing to write to the topic...wrote as much as i could think of oh well good luck
peace the word you can use to describe almost anything life,sex,crime and it feels like your replenishing its everything whether you understand it or not expect it to transition from full speed to stopped its perplexing to see how most games are fixed to make you fall and get explicitally dissed and shit its been said to win you should follow all the rules but you gotta break the law,before the law breaks you follow the game things will go your way from start to finish but thats false, a lost cause it'll leave your heart tinted cant believe the amount of dignity lost from this agression estatic to win but you lose and end up learning a lesson the government fools us with lies they're just like propaganda its sickening to see them attack full force with false slanders dont follow the rules say what u think no matter what your judging restock energy and unlock no matter how much you buggin..... equip your weapons and engage with infinite ammo and breach the main gates with ease imitating rambo and learn how to handle bad news cuz thats all there ever is every night all channels one hour all it is is business your hurt and thoughts are dispersed by the end of the mission released from the clinic like a victim gettin killed in his own kitchen once again its not the end but theres nothing left to gain not a grain of thought in my brain to assemble or fabricate gotta dig deep inside no matter what dirt is on your name cuz life is everything and nothing but a level on a game... |
“Games” Its all a game.. Feelings, emotions.. The way you chose to live.. Its like a role playing game.. That we call life.. So check this..Look...... I woke up, stretched my arms, it was 7am.. Patiently waiting for a call from a true friend.. I knew them... From way back, we used to scrap.. He used a mac, whereas I just got used to rap.. Improving tracks, is now my ambition it seems.. But working 9 to 5 is the extent of his dreams.. Repetitive things, were really never meant for me.. Mentally.... My life I take, seriously.. The way I’m hearing this please, you aint doing so well pal.. Heard ya going through hell now, and life at times smells foul.. Just held down.. From work, it hurts to see ya fuck it up.. I find that ya weak, but always acted so fucking tough.. I’ve had enough of bullshit, your on real some fool shit.. I don’t pull tricks, I just understand the rules bitch.. Your foolish, to think that life is something to waste.. I’ll put a fist at ya face, hope you discover your place.. In the world..... ...The bitch...shiit..Look, Fuck sake, I’d hate to be a martyr.. No part of anything about you now I really relate.. I’m just dealing with hate.....& we went....Our different ways.. Cause living pays, and the most important shit is getting paid.. I dare to say, fuck you, cause we aint enemies.. I just cut you off, so peace, I’m living off 2 g’s.. I’m fine, and I don’t care what you do with ya life.. Cause your games over, all right? I run it like Suge Knight.. My new level, I don’t need new enemies, your worthless.. But trust friends, cause their all part of life’s purpose.. I don’t fight nervous, & I’m over your weak shit.. So peep this, song your dismissal~it seems quick.. I mean it, living on the edge? I’ve had enough.. I just did a track to say fuck the world n because I’m giving up.. The game.. See.. I dont mean to sound sinicle.. I just wanna hear a good reason for not killing you..[echoes] |
fuck...why you had to drop a verse like that now thats my second loss lol oh well lets up so we could see the 5-0
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Lol, I dunno man I recon I came pretty weak on this battle.. It was 4am and I was still high while I was writing it last night.. So well see. |
Voted For: Nostradamus
Final/ Best verse i have seen from you yet... I like the way you say how life is a game, and you really did well to stay on topic with that... A few of the lines could have rhymed better like the one with gain and fabricate, and the main thing is that i really didn't feel a lot of emotion... Add that and it's almost flawless... Nostra/ Felt a whole lot more emotion in this verse... Like how it seemed like you went through this and it was definetly a good story to go with the topic... Nice multies in there also... V/Nos http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169528 |
Voted For: Nostradamus
yo this battle was coo both had hot drops but i was feelin nos's better his verse seemed to flow better better vocab and a better story so he get my vote.... final u also had a good verse nice evry thing from flow to wordplay and a decent story but i dont think it was enuff to beat nostradamus but nice try anyway bith stay up |
Voted For: Nostradamus
hmmm wow good battle says how dope the jury really is final - i felt you had some strong lines in her,as far as imagery your were decent...you could of did more with this topic,the emotion was okay,the vocab was quite good i must say,a nice structure with a smooth flow helped out alot,and the way you took to the topic wasn't bad.......7/10 nostradamus-i liked the storyline in this piece,you had basic vocab but it was okay,the rhyme scheme was decent,you flowed just about right,your structure and format was clean,i was loving the imagery you portrayed,the emotion was cool,but like a said the story line won it for you in this because you came quite creative and dropped acceptionally well.........8.5/10 overall u guys are both dope as fuck and im glad your in my crew :) but yeah read my feedback cus it explains who won this and why.......VOTE: nostradamus |
Voted For: Nostradamus
A'ight...in all honesty this was a fuckin' one sided battle...Final...you came pretty damn good...nice flow, emotion was lackin, imagery was a'ight...vocab was nice, but you really didnt have a point to yours...it seemed off topic...no worries jus keep elevatin and you'll do fine... Nos...nice shit...wow...imagery, story, emotion...vocab...flow was off in places, structure a bit uneven...but wow, imagery and story...whew...straight fuckin fire here...nice shit...you get this for an overall better piece...no hate...peace... |
Voted For: Nostradamus
I think that Nostradamus got this battle because i feel that Nostradamus came stronger in the following categories...Topic i felt Nostradamus got it was effective and was on point fina; u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion rhyming i felt went to Nostradamus good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Nostradamus and flow and structure i'll give to Nostradamus. V/Nostradamus P.S...admitting defeat isn't always a good idea final...lol |
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