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FlowIntelligent. 01-01-05 03:31 PM

Untraceable Vs. 4Fil
 
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Topic: Evil Thoughts

4fil 01-02-05 12:12 AM

check..........

Untraceable 01-02-05 08:57 PM

check.....im here now

Untraceable 01-06-05 03:32 PM

sorry bout the no show man.......my sis was in the hospital on tuesday........she got into an accident............so yeah........idk if i can still write a verse but he no show'd as well......but yeh ill do a shit verse real quick.......

these evil thoughts hoverin in my head
wantin me to kill, murder someone dead
instead a new thought comes to my mind
visions of no traces being left behind
musta been premination of whats to come
i see blood spatter and my knucles feel numb
huming a tune of the holloween movie
i really see myself killing someone truley
then i get the thought of jackin up kids
packin n puffin spliffs never supplied with mids
i get another vision of a robbery gone bad
killed two guys without even feelin a bit sad
my mind is gettin out of control with thoughts
leaving me worried and my temper is distrought
so then i begin to think how i can end it all
ten i realize that i need to kill for it to halt
so running to the store tuckin my nine mili
this girl looks fine, see's me and starts actin silly
next thing you know i picture here suckin my willy
but then i get back to work for more thoughts fill me
then i grab my gun and think of all the killing
then i get the thought that someone should just kill me

lol key'd shitverse :thumbup:

Untraceable 01-06-05 10:33 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169608
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169605
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169616

Denied Truth 01-06-05 10:58 PM

v/ for untraceable..becuz he whas late like me..and still posted somethin like meh..ole boi didn't even post shiiit..

FlowIntelligent. 01-07-05 01:15 AM

im sorry man you gotta pm me if you have a problem with posting on time i gotta be fair both lose by no show

untraceable -4
4fil -4


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