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Archeologist vs Kordozar
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No D/r Votes Eitha This A Elivation Battle So No Beef........................... Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-01-05 at 05:29 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
Archeologist has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 04:41 PM.
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Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 04:57 PM.
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This Kids Style Iss Worn Like Tha Rubber On A Flat Tire.. Rascalfire23: i try to teach peopl,Loss Ta Empire As A Rookie Guess His Teaching Backfired.... Despite His Aim Name,He Wont Beat Me By A "Hair"Fuckin Lil Rascal.. Me Goin Ova Tha Lines Iss Tha Onli Way You'll Win Tha Battle.. Dudes A Homo His Mouth Holds More Sacks Than D.Freeney... Attemptin Ta Be "Hot Dog",Still On Tha Skill Level Of A Weenie.. Rv Dream Team?He Wass Koed By Dopeman Like A Thieving Addict.. Being A Queer Is Hiss Habit His Families Full Of Faggits,So Iss No More Room In Tha Closet Kid Hass Ta Come Out Tha Addict... He's A Known Masterbator,So His "Palm" Comes In "Hand"y... To Soft Ta Be A Pussy,Rascalfire23: haha ino,Tha British Version Of Punnani...... |
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Lost Ta Empire A Month After He Registerd He Wass A Rookie,And Archaeologist Said He Teaches Pepl On Aim... Aim Sn-Rascalfire23 Alfalfa=Lil Rascal On Tha Movie He Won A Race By His Hair..... Claims He's Apart Of Tha Rv Dream Team Dunno What That Iss......... He Loss Ta Dopeman Who Sucks No Offense...... And He's 4rm England Great Britian Same Thing................ |
Brush off my shoulders so this kids eatin my dust..
told him we should get together..* ... he pounced on me with lust.. Low posts, low record, didn't read my danger signs.. You could come after this ruler.. ..but still Couldn't back up his lines.. I do feel for this joke, but still leave him dead in a hole Closest he came to dope.. .....was his name next to mine in the poll... Fall inline with the losers another of the masses.. And if success is in the eye of the beholder... .... your stuck wearing glasses.. Kordozar shud no "i dunt play with Light Weights" usualy.. You couldnt see the Dream Team... If you fell asleep whilst logged on to Rv dream team screen.. *get together = battles.. wordplay last bar w00t. Pz. |
Uppin This Shit Good Verse Archeo.............
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This was feedback posted for Archeologist
checkin the pollz
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Voted For: Kordozar
hmm tough battle to choos here....it could have gone either way.... kordozar..... This Kids Style Iss Worn Like Tha Rubber On A Flat Tire.. Rascalfire23: i try to teach peopl,Loss Ta Empire As A Rookie Guess His Teaching Backfired.... lol nice opener...nice personal...hit hard Despite His Aim Name,He Wont Beat Me By A "Hair"Fuckin Lil Rascal.. Me Goin Ova Tha Lines Iss Tha Onli Way You'll Win Tha Battle.. decent....hit ok Dudes A Homo His Mouth Holds More Sacks Than D.Freeney... Attemptin Ta Be "Hot Dog",Still On Tha Skill Level Of A Weenie.. lol actually made me laugh...humor is always good Rv Dream Team?He Wass Koed By Dopeman Like A Thieving Addict.. Being A Queer Is Hiss Habit His Families Full Of Faggits,So Iss No More Room In Tha Closet Kid Hass Ta Come Out Tha Addict... gay jokes played...but 1st line good personal...hit good though He's A Known Masterbator,So His "Palm" Comes In "Hand"y... To Soft Ta Be A Pussy,Rascalfire23: haha ino,Tha British Version Of Punnani...... good wordplay.....lol this made me laugh too....good closer arch................... Brush off my shoulders so this kids eatin my dust.. told him we should get together..* ... he pounced on me with lust.. hmm ok opener...not great though Low posts, low record, didn't read my danger signs.. You could come after this ruler.. ..but still Couldn't back up his lines.. good wordplay....hit ok I do feel for this joke, but still leave him dead in a hole Closest he came to dope.. .....was his name next to mine in the poll... lol nice punch Fall inline with the losers another of the masses.. And if success is in the eye of the beholder... .... your stuck wearing glasses.. pretty good....hit good...nice bar Kordozar shud no "i dunt play with Light Weights" usualy.. You couldnt see the Dream Team... If you fell asleep whilst logged on to Rv dream team screen.. ok....not a great closer...but it was ok basically i thought kordozar got this because his personals were better....his opener hit harder...closer hit harder.....basically he was more consistent throughout his verse and that got him my vote.....return favor...links in sig...thanks |
This was feedback posted for Kordozar
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Voted For: Archeologist
ok battle punches- Arch, more creative and harder hitting. Kord, ok punches, work on bein creative and not usin played punches. personals- Kordo, mostly for havin more of em. Work on ya material though. Arch, have more personals. metas- Kordo, for having them, not really that strong. aight though. Arch, didnt have em from what i saw. multis- Kordo, for more of em. arch, good, but not enough. word play- Arch, good wordplay, try to have more though. Kordo, work on wittier wordplay and better too. flow- Arch, flowed a lot easier, didnt fall off except for the last line. Kordo, work on ya flow, fell off a couple of times. structure- Arch, easier to read, and not many stretched lines. Kordo, ok structure, work on stretched lines. humor- Arch, had me laughin. Arch, not a bad drop. Work on more personals, and some more wordplay. Kordo, work on your punches, and your material for personals. Try better wordplay as well. No Hate Just An Honest Voter v/Archeologist px |
Voted For: Kordozar
"..Dudes A Homo His Mouth Holds More Sacks Than D.Freeney... Attemptin Ta Be "Hot Dog",Still On Tha Skill Level Of A Weenie.." hahaha nigga im still laffin from dat shit...u got at'em on dat 1 son...big ups 2 ya...wun Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Kordozar
Opener-Kor.. Closer-Kor.. Structure-Kor.. Multi's-Ehh both need to work on these but Kor.. Punches-Kor even tho that first bar was played man.. Metas-Kon.. Consistancy-Nun really both kept fallen off.. Enjoyed-Neather both need to make the verse more sick so i WANT TO keep reading... Overall Vote - Kon...he won but the cats where close..jus he pulled threw with them , arch sum of ur verse didnt even rhyme to me .. i was tryen to figure iit out maybe i read it wron i uno...but yea i feel Kon won this but yall both need to step it up on the real...eZ |
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