tha unknown (uk) vs SKAAL
 

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Check in by: 01-05-05 at 06:17 AM

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SKAAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-02-05 06:18 AM.

Tha Unknown (Uk) has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-04-05 05:34 AM.

I thought my battling was ova but, now you askin fo more
Skaal you lil punk ass nigga it's tyme to settle tha score,
I tried to leave shit alone an stay out tha race
but sence you wanna battle me I gotta put chu in yo place,
See I'm distraught an I'm very unpredictable
an you not so I know you ain't invincible,
Man it gets hot when you off up in this fukin field
so watch yo mouth or you's a done da da done deal,
Now wait a minute cuz you don't know what you're up against
I'm a king in tha south up north you jess a fukin prince,
Battling me I hope yo rhyme is intact
cuz I'm a battle you like they battling in Iraq,
An if you wanna get physical I can go biblical
Make 1 shot to yo temple an now it gets critical,

*nuff said*

ok i'm a spit first since you prolongin:
pay attention,

you skills is ejected and ya flow is on time~out/
you aint "unknown" it's just nobody cares enough to find~out/
i'll hit ya light switch burnin ya "shine~out"/
and leave this kid "buried alive" now way to climb~out/
i aint even worried i peeped this guys rhymes~out/
his tracks couldn't "make noise" played in a "mimes~house"/
you've been dimed~out, i know~ya~weakness~chump/
basically everything hip-hop you holdin~tha~bleachers~up/
you whack as shit i can't openly~speak~enough/
i'll break ya spirit put ya soul~in~a~fecal~cup/(shit sample cup)
so what now mister cashville ten~a~key/
i could have two feet in a casket you couldn't finish~me/
rap "barry bonds" i'm "juiced" you can't injure~me/
you gotta 6 bar max my potential is infinity/

Voted For: SKAAL

Yo, Skaal you toke this one. You came real hard. Structure was good, punches were tight tight, and it was just an overall good verse. Didn't really have any personals, but that was the only flaw.

Unknown, you gotta elevate.

Voted For: SKAAL

you skills is ejected and ya flow is on time~out/
you aint "unknown" it's just nobody cares enough to find~out/
i'll hit ya light switch burnin ya "shine~out"/
and leave this kid "buried alive" now way to climb~out/
i aint even worried i peeped this guys rhymes~out/
his tracks couldn't "make noise" played in a "mimes~house"/
you've been dimed~out, i know~ya~weakness~chump/
basically everything hip-hop you holdin~tha~bleachers~up/
you whack as shit i can't openly~speak~enough/
i'll break ya spirit put ya soul~in~a~fecal~cup/(shit sample cup)
so what now mister cashville ten~a~key/
i could have two feet in a casket you couldn't finish~me/
rap "barry bonds" i'm "juiced" you can't injure~me/
you gotta 6 bar max my potential is infinity/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ nice kid. Nice wordplay, with some punches. Punches were "eh" ok. Flow was nice.





I thought my battling was ova but, now you askin fo more
Skaal you lil punk ass nigga it's tyme to settle tha score,
I tried to leave shit alone an stay out tha race
but sence you wanna battle me I gotta put chu in yo place,
See I'm distraught an I'm very unpredictable
an you not so I know you ain't invincible,
Man it gets hot when you off up in this fukin field
so watch yo mouth or you's a done da da done deal,
Now wait a minute cuz you don't know what you're up against
I'm a king in tha south up north you jess a fukin prince,
Battling me I hope yo rhyme is intact
cuz I'm a battle you like they battling in Iraq,
An if you wanna get physical I can go biblical
Make 1 shot to yo temple an now it gets critical,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ nice flow fam. Punches werent that great. Wordplay i sense a little of them in your verse.




overall= close battle but i gots to go wtih skaal. Unknown- your punches were kinda played too basic with no creativity meaning no wordplays. Skaal, i sense your punches with wordplays and meta'z, great putting them together making it an decent punch. so i give this to skaal for harder punches with some wordplay,and decent meta'z


peace

Voted For: SKAAL

u took dis fam with just ya first 3 bars....

opener-ska
structure-a tie
punchlines-ska
multis-nun
creativity-ska
wordplay-nun
personals-ska
finisher-ska
enjoyed-ska....nuff said.....uk ya shit was 2 basic no punchlines or nothin no hate...

links r in my sig return da favor ya'll

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uppn for hate free votes i'm tryna get this thing closed


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This was feedback posted for SKAAL
 

checking the polls, decent battle you two.........!

good lookin son
still uppn

can somebody please vote on this shit so i won't have to look at it no more damn

Voted For: SKAAL

you skills is ejected and ya flow is on time~out/
you aint "unknown" it's just nobody cares enough to find~out
^^^only good personal, punch in battle. so he wins

Voted For: SKAAL

SKAAL took this one even though both of your drops weer kinda wack, but SKAAL came harder in the punches in this one & had a better flow + structure

(Uk) ur shit was kinda weak. those punches, hardly any of them landed and work on yo flow more too, & work on those punches also though. . .