*Caught up in Romeo*
 

Gentle reminders that you're thinking of me have me at your will.
They enthrawl my very essence & daudling on your words brings a thrill.
You are my Romeo, as a knight in armor my feet long been swept.
Though insignificant word been broke to me your promise's been kept.
As my senses tease me with the sweet smell of my lover I drift.
I've forgotten long days of sorrow, you force my sadness swift.
As if the cool saphire of your eye shines for my entrapture alone.
You walk with dignity into my heart & take your seat upon the thrown.
Draw the curtains upon my fears, battle insecurities with your word.
Your voice could never be mistaken by these ears, for it's the sweetest sound they've heard.
& though it seems we must have meant for one another by a devine fate.
This Juliette is missing her dear Romeo, for it is getting late!

hey its hayley (PAPISWIFEY) and i STILL caint login so im usin ya name again. sry! but of co'se dis poem was good and of co'se i hafta give ya luv 4 it! (and fa all of 'em)


You walk with dignity into my heart & take your seat upon the thrown.


i liked dat line fa sum reason and i dont know why. lol but im gettin anotha poem started so im might be postin again soon! much love!!!!!

hey..this was pretty good...i dont know..but i really did like this....keep it up..much luv..God bless..1..

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best post i've seen from u....imagery was good.....nice vocab...all 'round good.....keep ya head up sis.....
PIZZLE!!

i absoulutly loved this peice... everything was just awesome... the flow was amazin and the words fit together so perfectly... and it just so happens that i am feeling the same way as the juliet in the poem does.... teh imagry was beautiful and the feeling of the poem just was great... i loved it.. fave lines:

As my senses tease me with the sweet smell of my lover I drift.
I've forgotten long days of sorrow, you force my sadness swift.
As if the cool saphire of your eye shines for my entrapture alone.
You walk with dignity into my heart & take your seat upon the thrown.

those lines just flowed and melted together... keep it flowin

Thanx fo tha luv & I know y'all are about as deep into this relationship as my friends here so thanx fo every inspiring word!!

Ay gyrl..this was a tight piece..had sort of a fairy tale vibe to it..i was feelin it..whole concept, you gotta love it...stay up with this..
peace.

Diggin tha whole Romeo Juliet theme
props

~1~