Only Trying by, Original .A.B.
 

The Tightest from this site psh yea right
Im Steady allways ready to put up a good fight
Im like a Hood Knight but only stood Shook
I was only trying thats why im off the hook
talkin crap and slappin backs crackin macks
the Black was Back to reinact the whack
Im only dieing cause how so hard im trying
I started lieing and guess what i started crying
it was a hard time for me and then became a mc
Struggled at first but then i was tight as can be
so dont get me wronge i freestyled this one See
And nuttin gets me wronge im the Original .A.B.\


plz leave some feed iight 1

so leave some feed iight no hataz pz..........................................

So Uppin this shit fa sho fa sho fa sho fa sho my nigaz holla

Leave some feed right about now juss playin holla ahahahh

Alright you had some multi'z nice flow, upp your vocab. The thing that really stood out in your verse was flow and the multi'z. keep dropping. props to you. :thumbup:

feed back
 

You had a tight flow,but like he said word play needs work
Im in need of the same,because im trying to get better
on my word play to,,,,
daum look at the date i posted
an all of those who posted afterwards,
but didnt give feed before the droped,,, :nono:
Its the one called Lyrically gifted,,,
These rules needs to be inforced more,no feed back
then no posting,,,its that simple,,,
but you had a nice drop hommie :thumbup: