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dOpEbOi 210 vs Kordozar
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8 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Due In 20 Minutes Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-02-05 at 10:52 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-02-05 10:22 PM.
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dOpEbOi 210 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-02-05 10:22 PM.
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im tha king of tha south n kordozar gettin at me is a mistake
like wen ja started shootin at da mouf im spittin lyrical supremacy korodzar spittin like apple juice, im spittin like hennsey im sorta like tha montana of my time cuz tha 2 things i love doin is spittin a verse n commitin a crime kordozar thought he had it in tha bag wen he saw my record at 0 n 0 but little did he kno, dey call me junior robert DeNiro... yea aint spit a verse in a while...haha |
This 14 Soon Ta Be 15 Year Old A Homo,And He Hasnt Hit Pue-Ber-Ty... He Wont Make A Vet,Tha Onli Thing That Ever "Blew Up" Down South Wass Oklahoma City... Wouldn't Be A "DopeBoi" If His Father Wass A Known Hustla... You A Fag Who Studies Insests,So You Have Sex With Ya Brotha..... Be4 This Newbie Reaches 30 Posts He'll Want Ta End His Carrier.. This Kid 4rm TX PlAyBoI's Boi,Guess He Idolizes Queers.. Uncofident,Even He Knows His Rappin Sucks.... Paper Or Plastic?Choose His Girl She Gets Bagged And Stuffed...... |
LMFAO...nigga str8 merkd me...next time ill spend more then 10 minutes er somethin??
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Uppin This Fa Some Votes.........
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Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111Vote Pepl Geesh.........
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Voted For: Kordozar
whack battle. but kordazar basically stole da battle. he had better punches. relle aint nuttin to explain. oklahoma city-down south, huh? but otha than dat ur shit was hot v/kordazar |
Voted For: Kordozar
Voted for Kordozar Kordozar jus crushed the opposition, the punches were off the chain they made me say OHHH DAMN when I read them, the flow was great rhymin was off the chain as well Dope ya diss was short and the punches not that heavy but u can only get better wit time Good Battle Kordozar (TKO) got my vote |
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Yea Oklahoma Iss Down South Lol Uppin Still................... |
Voted For: Kordozar
dopeboi did u notice u made no fuckin sence u had the worst fuckin thing i ever seen i aint sayin u the worst but u had the worst right there punches off personals wherent there SENCE u need some i ddint like it from the start 2 the end elavate kordozar had a natrul beat he probly didint try as hard but his punches stayed connected like dsl and yea he got this by far |
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Voted For: Kordozar
this was pretty much onesided structure-K punches-K opener-K closer-K multis-None wordplay-None Creativity-K(last bar) enjoyment-K \V/-K my advice to dopeboi is....elevate...alot....on ur punches ey k...return tha favor at this battle man...an HONEST favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=161728 |
Voted For: Kordozar
have to go with kord on this one he came harder had better strucutre, more personels better flow and multis where better in this one no hate tho. This 14 Soon Ta Be 15 Year Old A Homo,And He Hasnt Hit Pue-Ber-Ty... He Wont Make A Vet,Tha Onli Thing That Ever "Blew Up" Down South Wass Oklahoma City... Wouldn't Be A "DopeBoi" If His Father Wass A Known Hustla... You A Fag Who Studies Insests,So You Have Sex With Ya Brotha..... Be4 This Newbie Reaches 30 Posts He'll Want Ta End His Carrier.. 9/10 im tha king of tha south n kordozar gettin at me is a mistake like wen ja started shootin at da mouf im spittin lyrical supremacy korodzar spittin like apple juice, im spittin like hennsey im sorta like tha montana of my time cuz tha 2 things i love doin is spittin a verse n commitin a crime keep elevating ur rhyming scheme iight 6.5/10 hit up on my links peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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